走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cümlə quruluşunu və qrammatikanı təkmilləşdirin; söz seçimini düzəldin və təkrarlardan çəkinin. Cavabınızı qısa və konkret saxlayın: bir mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın, sonra 1-2 dəstək cümləsi əlavə edin. Məsələn, fel formalarını («wake» → «walk», «know that» → «I know that») və təkrarlanan ifadələri aradan qaldırın.

範例: Yes, I walk a lot because my commute to work involves a long walk. I don't mind it, because walking keeps me fit and helps me feel more energetic throughout the day.

建議: Daha dəqiq və ardıcıl ifadələr istifadə edin; zamanları düzgün seçin (past tense). «Walking along» əvəzinə «walking alone» kimi doğru ifadələrdən istifadə edin və danışmanı bitirin — yarımçıq cümlələrdən çəkinin. Əlavə detalları əlaqələndirmək üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin.

範例: Yes, I often went for walks as a child, usually with my friends. We would chat about everything, and those walks made me very happy because they were a chance to relax and have fun together.

建議: Tərkibdə daha konkret səbəblər verin və söz seçiminə diqqət yetirin («bored from» → «bored with», «clear their months» mənasızdır — əvəzinə «clear their minds» istifadə edin). Sakitləşdirici və sağlamlıq faydalarını nümunə ilə göstərin və keçid sözləri ilə məntiqi əlaqə yaradın.

範例: People often walk in parks to escape work and household chores. Walking in nature helps clear the mind, reduces stress and makes people feel calmer and more energetic.

建議: Söz düzülüşünü və artiklları düzəldin («at the seashore» yaxşıdır, amma «the sound of sea» → «the sound of the sea»). Tələffüzdəki hestural filler-ləri («umm», «uh») azaltmağa çalışın. Cümlələri ardıcıllıqla və maksimum 3-4 cümlə ilə təşkil edin.

範例: I'd like to take a long walk along the seashore because I love the sound of the waves. In summer I often walk there with my family, but sometimes I enjoy going alone to relax and think.

建議: Zaman uyğunluğuna diqqət edin: sual «lately» keçmişə/son zamanlara işarə edir, amma «isn't» indiki zamandır; bunu uyğunlaşdırın. Daha aydın ifadə üçün qisaltmalardan və filler-lərdən çəkinin. Park və bulvarla bağlı konkret detalları əlavə edin (məsələn, nə görürsünüz, nə hiss edirsiniz).

範例: Lately I haven't walked much because the weather has been poor. However, when it's warm I like walking along the Boulevard since it's pleasant and relaxing, with cafés and tree-lined paths.

× Yes, I woke a lot because when I go to work I have a lot of way to walk on foot.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because when I go to work I have a long way to walk on foot.

The student used 'woke' (past tense of 'wake') incorrectly instead of the present tense 'walk'. Use present simple 'walk' for habitual actions. Also 'a lot of way' is ungrammatical; use 'a long way' or 'a lot of distance'. Suggestion: Use present simple for routines (I walk), and say 'a long way' or 'a lot of distance'.

× That's why I do it.

✓ That's why I do it.

Sentence is grammatically fine but contextually redundant; no change needed. Suggestion: You can also say 'That's why I walk' for clarity.

× But I don't, I don't I don't have any complain about it because know that walking is so useful for our body for.

✓ But I don't have any complaints about it because I know that walking is very useful for our body.

Missing subject 'I' before 'know', incorrect form 'complain' (verb) instead of plural noun 'complaints', and extra word 'for' at end. Use 'I know' and 'complaints'. Suggestion: Use subject + verb (I know) and correct noun forms (complaints). Remove unnecessary words.

× Yes, especially when I was a child, I really enjoyed walking along or walking with my friends.

✓ Yes, especially when I was a child, I really enjoyed walking alone or walking with my friends.

The student wrote 'along' instead of 'alone'. 'Enjoyed' is correct past tense for childhood habits. Correct the misspelling to 'alone'. Suggestion: Check similar-sounding words (along vs alone).

× It really made me happy because when I was working with my friends, I talked a lot about everything.

✓ It really made me happy because when I was with my friends, I talked a lot about everything.

'Working with my friends' implies employment; intended meaning is social time. Use 'with my friends'. Suggestion: Use 'with' for spending time together unless you mean 'working'.

× Also when I when I was.

✓ Also, when I was a child.

Fragmentary sentence lacking completion. Complete the clause by repeating the time reference 'a child'. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; finish thoughts.

× I think that sometimes people really feel bored from the work and umm, home chores.

✓ I think that sometimes people really feel bored with work and home chores.

Use 'bored with' or 'bored by', not 'bored from'. Also omit 'the' before 'work' for general meaning. Suggestion: Use correct preposition 'with' and use uncountable nouns without 'the' for general statements.

× That's why they prefer, uh, they prefer clear their months, uh, by walking in the park because it really feels more energetic and more calmer for you.

✓ That's why they prefer, uh, to clear their minds, uh, by walking in the park because it makes you feel more energetic and calmer.

'Prefer' should be followed by 'to' + infinitive or gerund form; 'prefer to clear' or 'prefer clearing'. The phrase 'clear their months' is wrong; intended 'clear their minds'. 'Feels more energetic' should be 'makes you feel more energetic' and 'more calmer' is redundant; use 'calmer'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer to + verb' or 'prefer + -ing', use correct collocations ('clear their minds'), and avoid double comparatives.

× I would like to take a long walk umm, at the seashore.

✓ I would like to take a long walk at the seashore.

Sentence is fine grammatically; keep 'would like' for hypothetical preference. Remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: Avoid fillers in speaking; they are not grammatical errors but affect fluency.

× I really like the sound of sea because uh, especially in the summer, umm, I really do it.

✓ I really like the sound of the sea because, especially in the summer, I often do this.

Missing article 'the' before 'sea'. 'I really do it' is vague; better 'I often do this' or 'I go there often'. Suggestion: Use articles with singular countable nouns ('the sea') and replace vague pronouns with clear actions.

× I go with my family or maybe alone.

✓ I go with my family or maybe alone.

Sentence is correct. No grammatical change needed; keeps pronoun usage appropriate. Suggestion: None.

× I just walking at the sea.

✓ I just walk by the sea.

Missing auxiliary/verb form: 'I just walking' is ungrammatical. Use present simple 'I just walk' or 'I am just walking'. Also 'at the sea' -> 'by the sea' or 'along the sea'. Suggestion: Use correct verb form (subject + base verb) and appropriate preposition ('by' or 'along').

× Lately, of course the weather isn't good and that's why I don't do like this walking a lot.

✓ Lately, of course the weather hasn't been good and that's why I haven't been walking like this a lot.

Use present perfect 'hasn't been' for recent periods and present perfect continuous 'haven't been walking' to indicate recent repeated action. 'I don't do like this walking' is ungrammatical; rephrase. Suggestion: Use present perfect for ongoing recent situations and correct verb patterns for habitual actions.

× But when the weather is so warm, I prefer walking umm along the Boulevard because it's still good place for me.

✓ But when the weather is warm, I prefer walking along the boulevard because it's still a good place for me.

'Is so warm' is colloquial; 'is warm' is sufficient. Capitalization of 'Boulevard' not necessary unless proper noun. Missing article 'a' before 'good place'. Suggestion: Use 'a good place' and avoid unnecessary intensifiers like 'so' in neutral descriptions.

× I find it relaxing.

✓ I find it relaxing.

Sentence is correct as written. Suggestion: None.