走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够直接且有语法和表达错误。应直接回应“是否经常步行”，并简洁说明原因，避免无关的健身细节。注意时态和搭配（e.g. “a fan of walking” 而不是 “a fan of working”），句子不要过长。可用连接词加强逻辑。

範例: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I enjoy walking between classes and I often go for short walks in the evenings to relax after studying. Because I exercise regularly, walking is a convenient and low-impact way for me to stay active.

建議: 回答中时态和语法错误较多（如“to hanging”“don't really went”）。应先以主题句直接回答，然后用一两句具体细节支持，例如和朋友一起跑步或骑车。保持句子简短并用合适的过去时。

範例: Not really. When I was a child I preferred running around or riding a bicycle with my friends, so I rarely went on leisurely walks. We often explored the neighborhood on our bikes instead.

建議: 回答表达含糊且用词不当（如“work in the parks”“harmonia”）。应直接提出原因并给出具体细节或例子，使用合适词汇（natural scenery, fresh air, peaceful atmosphere）。用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: People like walking in parks because of the fresh air and pleasant scenery. For example, parks offer trees, flowers and quiet paths that help people relax and escape from city noise.

建議: 回答总体可以理解但有重复与不必要的插入（如“I think this is an interesting question that hasn't thought before”）。应直接回答并给出一两个具体理由或想象的细节，句子保持简洁自然。

範例: I would like to take a long walk along a river because the views are calming and there is usually a gentle breeze. Walking by water helps me think clearly and enjoy nature for several hours.

建議: 回答包含信息但语法和短语搭配不准确（如“besides our university”“that running through”）。应直接回答并用正确的过去时与地名描述，提供一两个具体细节（时间、感受、景色）。

範例: I went for a walk last week along the river near our university. The path follows the river through the city and ends at the sea, and I enjoyed the cool breeze and city views.

× Of course, actually I'm a big fan of working both in the gym or in the playgrounds, because I'm a kind of person that spends a lot of time working out in the gym, so that you have to do more targeting.

✓ Of course. Actually I'm a big fan of working out both in the gym and on the playground, because I'm the kind of person who spends a lot of time working out in the gym, so you have to do more targeted training.

错误类型：动词后接 -ing 形式 或 动词搭配不当（Grammar Problem Type 8）。说明：原句中多处动词短语搭配不当。1) 原句用 working both in the gym or in the playgrounds：应为 working out both in the gym and on the playground（使用并列连词 and，且动词短语为 work out）。2) playgrounds 前应使用介词 on 而非 in。3) I'm a kind of person that → 常用 the kind of person who。4) so that you have to do more targeting 不通顺，意欲表达“更有针对性的训练”，应改为 so you have to do more targeted training 或 so that you can train more specifically。建议：注意动词短语的固定搭配（work out），并列结构用 and，选择正确介词（on the playground），使用定型从句 the kind of ... who，表达“有针对性”用形容词 targeted + 名词 training。

× Well, to be honest, when I was young, my first choice was always to hanging out with my friends by running or riding a bicycle. So when I was young I don't really went outside to have a walk.

✓ Well, to be honest, when I was young, my first choice was always to hang out with my friends by running or riding a bicycle. So when I was young I didn't really go outside to take walks.

错误类型：过去时问题（Grammar Problem Type 5）。说明：1) was always to hanging out 中 hang 应为不带 -ing 的动词原形 hang，因为结构是 'was to + verb' 或更自然地 'was always to hang out'。2) I don't really went outside 使用了现在时助动词 do 与过去式 went 混用，应使用过去式否定 didn't + 动词原形：I didn't really go outside。3) 'to have a walk' 更自然表达为 'to take walks' 或 'to go for walks'。建议：回顾一般过去时的构成，否定句用 didn't + 动词原形；在固定表达中使用正确动词形式（hang out, take a walk/go for a walk）。

× As far as I'm concerned, what attracts people most to work in the parks is that they can enjoy the natural and the feel, the harmonia between human and the natural.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, what attracts people most to walking in the parks is that they can enjoy nature and the harmony between humans and nature.

错误类型：形容词或副词使用不当（Grammar Problem Type 13）。说明：1) attract people to work in the parks 用词不当，应该是 attract people to walk/ walking in the parks（使用动名词 walking）。2) enjoy the natural and the feel 表达不自然，应为 enjoy nature and the feeling 或更简洁的 enjoy nature。3) harmonia 是拼写错误，应为 harmony；between human and the natural 应为 between humans and nature（复数和名词搭配）。建议：使用正确词汇（harmony），用名词 nature 替代 the natural，不要重复冗余短语；注意人称复数 humans 与 nature 的搭配。

× Well, I think this is an an interesting question that hasn't thought before, but I reckon that I would choose to take a long walk in the parks or along the river.

✓ Well, I think this is an interesting question that I haven't thought about before, but I reckon that I would choose to take a long walk in the park or along the river.

错误类型：句子结构错误（Grammar Problem Type 26）。说明：1) 重复冠词 an an。2) that hasn't thought before 缺少主语且动词形式不当，应为 that I haven't thought about before。3) in the parks 更自然为 in the park（泛指某个公园或公园里），或可保留 plural depending on context，但通常用 singular。建议：确保从句有完整主语和谓语（I haven't thought about），删除重复词，使用固定短语 think about sth，注意冠词重复问题。

× Well, I would say I went for a walk last week alongside the river besides our university that running through the Shenzhen city into the sea.

✓ Well, I would say I went for a walk last week alongside the river beside our university that runs through Shenzhen into the sea.

错误类型：过去时问题（Grammar Problem Type 5）和句子结构相关错误。说明：1) 原句中 that running through... 中动词应为第三人称单数 runs，因为先行词是 river（或 the river）→ 属于第三人称单数现在时描述河流的位置关系，用 runs。2) besides our university 用词不当，旁边应为 beside our university。3) Shenzhen city into the sea 可简化为 Shenzhen into the sea 或 runs through Shenzhen into the sea。建议：注意时态与主谓一致（river → runs），使用正确介词 beside 表示“在……旁边”，并使句子结构更简洁明确。