走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct vocabulary and simple linking words. Avoid mispronounced/incorrect words (e.g. "Aussies", "work for my from the station") and keep sentences concise (max 5).

範例: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk about 15 minutes from the station to my home, and I also like taking walks at night because they help me clear my mind and relax.

建議: Give a clear affirmative or negative answer followed by a specific memory or example. Use past tense accurately and avoid repetition. Include a linking phrase like "for example" or "for instance" and one concrete detail (where, who, or what you did).

範例: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. For example, I used to walk to the park near my house with my friends every afternoon to play and explore.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and then two specific reasons with linking words. Use accurate verbs (e.g. "exercise" or "relax") and avoid repeating incorrect verbs like "work" when you mean "walk" or "exercise." Provide a brief example to support your point.

範例: People like walking in parks because it is a pleasant way to exercise and stay fit. Also, parks are peaceful, so many people walk there to relax and clear their minds.

建議: Answer directly with a clear location and give one or two specific reasons why. Use correct phrases (e.g. "walk along") and avoid fragmented sentences. Add a linking word for coherence.

範例: I would like to take a long walk along the moat of the Imperial Palace in Tokyo because it is scenic and popular with walkers and runners, and the route feels peaceful despite being in the city.

建議: Use consistent past tense when talking about a recent event and avoid repeating phrases. Start with a clear past-time marker (e.g. "Recently" or "Last week") and give one or two specific purposes or destinations. Keep it concise.

範例: Recently I went for a walk near my house. I walked to the supermarket and also took a short stroll around the neighborhood to keep fit.

× Yes, I work a lot 'cause my Aussies 15 minutes work for my from the station and also I like walking in the night in order to organize my mind.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because my house is 15 minutes' walk from the station, and I also like walking at night to clear my mind.

The sentence contains incorrect pronouns and word choices causing unclear meaning. 'Aussies' is incorrect for 'house'; 'work' should be 'walk'; 'my from the station' is an incorrect word order; 'in the night' should be 'at night'; 'in order to organize my mind' is unnatural — 'to clear my mind' is more idiomatic. Fixes: replace wrong words with correct nouns/pronouns, correct word order, use correct preposition 'at', and use a natural expression for purpose.

× Yes, I would often coincide to have a work when I was a child, for example.

✓ Yes, I often used to go for walks when I was a child, for example.

The original uses incorrect verbs: 'would often coincide to have a work' is ungrammatical. Use 'used to' or 'would' with the base verb for habitual past actions. 'Go for walks' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: use 'used to' or 'would' + base verb to describe past habitual actions.

× I would I would go for work in order to go to.

✓ I would go for walks to get out of the house.

The original sentence repeats 'I would' and lacks a clear object or purpose: 'go for work in order to go to' is incomplete. Provide a clear activity and purpose. Suggested structure: 'I would go for walks to [purpose]'. Use a complete clause to convey meaning.

× I guess people want to stay fit and also like me, they work in parks in order to organize their mind.

✓ I guess people want to stay fit, and likewise, they walk in parks to clear their minds.

Errors: 'like me' should be 'like me' set off correctly or replaced with 'likewise'; 'work' is wrong verb — should be 'walk'; 'organize their mind' is unnatural — use 'clear their minds'. Fix pronoun/reference and use correct verbs and idiomatic expressions.

× I'd like to take a look. Work along Imperial Palace in Tokyo goes.

✓ I'd like to take a walk along the Imperial Palace in Tokyo.

'Take a look' is incorrect for 'take a walk'. 'Work along Imperial Palace in Tokyo goes' is ungrammatical and uses the wrong verb 'work' instead of 'walk' and incorrect word order. Use the -ing form only when grammatically required; here 'take a walk' is the correct noun phrase.

× That's a place where many people are enjoying walking or running.

✓ That's a place where many people enjoy walking or running.

Present continuous 'are enjoying' implies a temporary action; a general statement about what people do in that place uses the simple present 'enjoy'. Use simple present for habitual or general facts.

× I go for a walk near my house lately. I go for a walk. And go to the supermarket or just for maintaining my health.

✓ I've been going for walks near my house lately. I go to the supermarket or walk just to maintain my health.

'Lately' with a recent ongoing action requires present perfect continuous ('I've been going') or present perfect ('I've gone'). Repetition 'I go for a walk. And go to the supermarket' lacks subjects and proper tense. Also 'for maintaining my health' should be 'to maintain my health'. Fix tense to reflect recent habitual actions and correct infinitive for purpose.