走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 内容相关但表达不够清晰，句子过长且有语法错误。答题时应先直接回应问题（Yes/No + 简短原因），然后用1-2句支持细节，并使用连词保持连贯。注意时态和主谓一致，避免多余信息。

範例: Yes, I walk every day because my university is close to my dorm. I usually walk there each morning and stop to buy breakfast on the way, which helps me feel refreshed and ready for classes.

建議: 回答含混且语法和时态混乱，句子不连贯。应用过去时描述童年情况，先直接回答，然后给出具体年龄和原因，句子简洁且用连接词衔接。避免未完成的句子。

範例: Not really. My parents thought it was unsafe, so I rarely walked outside when I was young. I only started walking to school by myself when I was about 15, when I entered junior high.

建議: 观点明确但表达重复，词汇使用不准确，句子未完结。应先给出直接理由，然后用具体细节支持并用合适的连接词。注意词汇搭配（e.g. 'live in the city', 'feel close to nature'）。

範例: People enjoy walking in parks because parks offer greenery and fresh air. For example, since I live in the city with few trees, walking in a park makes me feel closer to nature and helps me relax.

建議: 回答有创意但语法和词汇使用不准确，句子冗长且有重复。先直接回答地点，然后用1-2句具体描述原因和感受，注意短语搭配（e.g. 'stay in a hostel', 'go for a walk in nature', 'climb a mountain'）。

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the mountains. I would hike to the summit alone because reaching the top would give me a strong sense of achievement and peacefulness.

建議: 回答具体且相关，但有小的语法和词序错误。应先用过去时直接回答地点，然后补充细节并自然使用连接词。调整词序和大写错误（e.g. 'river view', 'college'）。

範例: I went to a riverside park near my college in Taipei recently. I like it because it's large, offers a pleasant river view, and it's a great place for jogging.

× I work a lot because my school is very close to my dormitory so I usually walk there every morning and I can buy some breakfast in my road and that's really enjoyable and make me happy for the classes.

✓ I work a lot because my school is very close to my dormitory, so I usually walk there every morning and I can buy some breakfast on my road; that's really enjoyable and makes me happy for my classes.

错误类型：动词现在分词/动词形式使用不当（也涉及主谓一致）。句子中“make me happy”应与主语“that's”一致，用第三人称单数“makes”。另外，应使用介词“on my road”更自然，句子也需要标点分隔以避免冗长。建议检查主语和动词的人称和数，以及适当使用标点和介词。

× Not really my mom and my dad think it's dangerous for a child to go outside, so I have the habit of walking along outside since I was 15 years old, I was in a junior high school. I will go to school by myself suddenly and.

✓ Not really. My mom and dad thought it was dangerous for a child to go outside, so I didn't have the habit of walking outside until I was 15 years old when I was in junior high school. I started going to school by myself then.

错误类型：过去时使用不当。原句中讲述过去的习惯和经历，应使用过去时态（thought, was, didn't have, started）。另外表达不连贯、句子残缺（最后的“suddenly and.”不完整）。建议把描述过去的事件统一用过去时，并把句子分开以表达完整意思。

× I work a lot because my school is very close to my dormitory so I usually walk there every morning and I can buy some breakfast in my road and that's really enjoyable and make me happy for the classes.

✓ I work a lot because my school is very close to my dormitory, so I usually walk there every morning and I can buy some breakfast on my road; that's really enjoyable and makes me happy for my classes.

错误类型：介词使用不当。英语中通常说“on the road”或“along the road”，而不是“in my road”。建议使用常见搭配如“on my way”或“along the road”。

× I think I know the reason because I am exactly the person like working in the park because I live in city, urban city, so there's lack of tree and the green plants. So when I walk in the park I can feel like in the nature and.

✓ I think I know the reason because I'm exactly the kind of person who likes walking in parks. I live in the city, so there's a lack of trees and greenery. When I walk in the park, I feel like I'm in nature.

错误类型：代词和短语使用不当以及名词复数/不可数问题。原句中“the person like working”结构错误，应为“the kind of person who likes walking”。“city”前需加定冠词或不加“the”取决上下文；“lack of tree and the green plants”应为“a lack of trees and greenery”。最后句子不完整。建议使用正确的关系代词结构并注意名词的单复数与不可数形式。

× I always live in the hostel and bus tall, so if I have a chance to choose a place to have a long walk, I would choose in the nature. I would pick up a beautiful mountain and walk by myself to the top and I think I will be get the feeling of sense of achievement.

✓ I usually live in a hostel and take the bus, so if I had a chance to choose a place for a long walk, I would choose to go into nature. I would pick a beautiful mountain and walk by myself to the top, and I think I would get a sense of achievement.

错误类型：单复数及词语搭配问题。原句“bus tall”不明，推测为“take the bus”；“choose in the nature”应为“choose to go into nature”或“choose a natural place”；“pick up a beautiful mountain”应为“pick a beautiful mountain”；“the feeling of sense of achievement”重复，简化为“a sense of achievement”。建议注意名词单复数形式及固定搭配，使用条件句时主句与从句时态一致（虚拟语气）。

× I went to the park beside the river nearby my College in Taipei. I really love the park because it's so big and I can enjoy the Riverview just beside to me and I love jogging in the park.

✓ I went to the park beside the river near my college in Taipei. I really love the park because it's so big and I can enjoy the river view right beside me, and I love jogging in the park.

错误类型：过去时态与介词使用。句中“nearby my College”应为“near my college”；“Riverview”应分写为“river view”；“beside to me”是不正确的介词搭配，应为“beside me”或“right beside me”。另外句首使用过去时“went”描述最近一次去，但后文描述喜好可用一般现在时，需注意时态一致性。建议修正介词搭配并统一大小写和空格。