食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and concise with a clear topic sentence, remove hesitations, and add one specific reason or detail to make the answer natural and informative. Use linking words to improve flow.

範例: My favourite food is Kapsa, a spiced rice dish with chicken. I usually have it for lunch because it is filling and full of flavour, and I enjoy the mix of aromatic spices and tender chicken.

建議: Start with a direct statement, avoid repetition and filler, and give a specific example of sweet food and a brief reason. Use a linking phrase to connect reason and example.

範例: When I was young I preferred sweet foods. For example, I ate a lot of candy and cakes because I didn't worry about my health, and I liked the quick energy and taste they gave me.

建議: Give a clear, coherent answer: state whether you change foods seasonally, then give 1–2 specific conditions that affect your choices (season, location, company). Eliminate fillers and uncertain phrases.

範例: Yes, I do change what I eat at different times. For instance, in summer I prefer salads and cold dishes, while in winter I eat more soups and stews; I also choose foods depending on where I am or who I am with.

× Maybe it's uh, not the best food for me, but it's the best for the lunch.

✓ Maybe it's not the best food for me, but it's the best for lunch.

Use of the definite article 'the' before 'lunch' is incorrect here. 'Lunch' as a meal generally does not need an article when speaking about it in general. Remove 'the' and also omit filler 'uh' for clarity.

× Maybe it's sweet food, 'cause when I when I am young, I didn't care about my health and about my body.

✓ Maybe I liked sweet food, because when I was young I didn't care about my health or my body.

Tense inconsistency: 'when I am young' should be past tense 'when I was young' to match 'didn't care'. Also 'Maybe it's sweet food' should be 'Maybe I liked sweet food' to express past preference. Replace 'cause' with 'because' and simplify 'about my health and about my body' to 'about my health or my body' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, of course, maybe not in the year.

✓ Yes, of course, maybe not in a year.

Phrase 'in the year' is unclear and unnatural. Use 'in a year' if meaning 'during a single year' or better omit if unnecessary. Context likely means 'not always throughout the year' — consider 'not throughout the year' if that is intended.

× Every weeks or uh, every month I eat different foods or different types of foods.

✓ Every week or every month I eat different foods or different types of food.

Use 'every week' (singular) not 'every weeks'. 'Types of foods' is wordy; 'types of food' is more natural. Remove filler 'uh'.

× It's the amount of uh, what? Where am I or, uh, who's it with me?

✓ It depends on the amount, where I am, or who I am with.

Original is disfluent and uses incorrect pronoun order 'who's it with me'. Use 'who I am with' for correct pronoun and preposition placement. 'It's the amount of' should be 'It depends on the amount' to express dependence on quantity. Remove fillers for clarity.