食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence naming the food, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word choices (e.g. “lucid” is wrong here). Keep to 3–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g. crunchy, juicy, flavorful).

範例: My favourite food is fried chicken. I particularly like it because the skin is crispy while the meat stays juicy, which gives a great contrast. Also, it’s very flavorful because of the spices used, so I often crave it after a long day.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence naming the food, then add specific sensory details and a brief reason why you liked it. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “because” and “so” to connect ideas. Limit to 3–4 clear sentences.

範例: When I was young, I loved apple pie. Because it was baked at home, the filling was warm and sweet and the pastry was nicely crisp. I loved it especially with a little cream or ice cream on top, which made it even more comforting.

建議: Give a direct answer, then explain briefly with specific examples and linking words. Avoid vague generalities and repetition. Mention seasonal foods or festivals to make the response concrete and coherent. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter my family makes hot soups and stews to stay warm, while in summer we eat more salads and fruits like watermelon. During holidays we also prepare special dishes such as roast or sweet cakes.

建議: Answer directly whether it has changed, then provide a clear reason and a contrasting detail using linking words (e.g. “when I was a child… but now…”). Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Use precise language and one or two supporting details. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I preferred apple pie because it was sweet and comforting, but now I prefer fried chicken because I enjoy the crispy texture and savory flavors more.

× Oh, I actually have a lot of favorite food, but if I have to choose one, I would like to say that it is fried chicken.

✓ Oh, I actually have a lot of favorite foods, but if I have to choose one, I would say it is fried chicken.

'Favorite food' should be plural ('favorite foods') when referring to many items. Also 'would like to say that it is' is wordy and slightly unnatural; 'would say it is' is more natural in this context. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and simplify phrasing for fluency.

× It is one of the best meal in my life that I have tried and taste a very tasty and lucid and I wish I could eat all day.

✓ It is one of the best meals I have tried in my life; it tastes very tasty and I wish I could eat it all day.

Use plural 'meals' with 'one of the' (Grammar problem type 1 applies but here the core error is adjective/noun agreement). 'In my life' should follow 'tried'. 'Taste' needs correct verb form 'tastes' and 'lucid' is incorrect in this context; remove it. Also include the object 'it' after 'eat'. Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement and choose appropriate adjectives; avoid unrelated words like 'lucid'.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? - I have many dishes when I was young that I have taste but I think it would be the apple pie.

✓ I had many dishes when I was young that I tasted, but I think it was apple pie.

When talking about past habits, use past simple: 'had' and 'tasted' rather than present perfect. 'It would be the apple pie' is incorrect tense and article use; use 'it was apple pie.' Suggestion: use past simple for definite past events and remove unnecessary articles.

× It tastes very sweet and also crispy at the age because it was cooked in the oven.

✓ It tasted very sweet and crispy because it was baked in the oven.

Maintain past tense 'tasted' for past experience. 'At the age' is incorrect here and unnecessary. 'Cooked in the oven' is acceptable but 'baked in the oven' is more natural for pie. Suggestion: use precise verbs (bake) and drop irrelevant phrases like 'at the age'.

× I really enjoy eating the crisp, the crispy.

✓ I really enjoyed the crispiness.

Mixing noun and adjective forms is incorrect. Use the noun 'crispiness' or say 'I really enjoyed how crispy it was.' Also maintain past tense to match context. Suggestion: choose the correct form (noun/adjective) and keep consistent tense.

× Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

The use of 'do' is unnecessary for a simple present affirmative sentence. Remove auxiliary 'do' to sound natural. Suggestion: in affirmative present simple, omit 'do' unless used for emphasis.

× We always have to taste many different kind of food so we can we can know about more dishes rather than one dishes, one dish and it is very happy to eat.

✓ We always try many different kinds of food so we can learn about more dishes rather than just one, and it makes us happy to eat them.

Use plural 'kinds' for 'many different', and 'food' with 'kinds of'. 'We can know about' is awkward; use 'learn about'. 'One dishes' is incorrect plural; use 'just one'. 'It is very happy to eat' should be 'it makes us happy to eat them.' Suggestion: match singular/plural, choose natural verbs (try, learn), and ensure subjects and verbs agree.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? - I have to say that it it is changed since I was a child because I chose to eat fried chicken rather than eating an apple pie when I was a kid.

✓ I have to say that it has changed since I was a child because I chose to eat fried chicken rather than apple pie when I was a kid.

Use present perfect 'has changed' for a change that started in the past and continues to now. 'It it is changed' is incorrect and redundant. After 'rather than' use the base noun 'apple pie' without 'eating'. Suggestion: use correct perfect tense and avoid redundant words.

× The fried chicken makes me feel more, uh, delicious and tasty.

✓ Fried chicken tastes more delicious to me.

'Makes me feel delicious' is incorrect because 'delicious' describes food, not the eater. Use 'tastes delicious' or 'is more delicious to me.' Suggestion: match adjectives to the correct subject (food tastes delicious; people feel delicious is unnatural).

× So I'll choose it then the five.

✓ So I would choose it then.

The phrase 'then the five' is unclear and ungrammatical. Use a concise conclusion like 'So I would choose it.' Maintain conditional/modal consistency with 'would.' Suggestion: avoid unclear fragments and keep sentence structure simple and logical.