食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and include a brief reason with one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail using a linking word.

範例: My favourite food is crispy fried chicken. For example, I like the crunchy coating and the tender chicken breast because it tastes juicy and satisfying.

建議: Organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly why and give a specific example. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct tense and redundancy errors.

範例: When I was young, I mainly ate snacks rather than proper meals. For example, I often chose chips and sweets because my friends brought them to school, so I grew used to that habit.

建議: Answer directly and avoid vague or irrelevant remarks. Give one or two clear examples and use linking words. Correct pronoun and word choice mistakes and avoid repeating words.

範例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, during Christmas many people eat turkey and special desserts, whereas at other times they stick to everyday meals.

建議: Keep the answer concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, give a reason for the change, and give a specific example of current habits. Remove fillers and repetition.

範例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As I've grown older, I prefer healthier meals; for instance, I now choose grilled chicken and salads and only have sweets and chips occasionally.

× I love it because it's a crunchy and the the chicken breast is soft and tender.

✓ I love it because it's crunchy and the chicken breast is soft and tender.

The article 'a' before 'crunchy' is incorrect because 'crunchy' is an adjective modifying 'it' and does not need an indefinite article; use the adjective alone. Also remove the duplicate 'the'. Suggestion: say 'it's crunchy' or 'it has a crunchy coating.'

× When I was young, I immediately preferred snacks, any kind of snacks like chips, sweets.

✓ When I was young, I preferred snacks, any kind of snack like chips and sweets.

The phrase 'any kind of snacks' mixes singular 'kind' with plural 'snacks'; use 'any kind of snack' or 'all kinds of snacks'. Also 'immediately preferred' is odd here; 'preferred' suffices. Suggestion: use 'any kind of snack' or 'all kinds of snacks.'

× I wasn't into that much of regular food.

✓ I wasn't into regular food that much.

Word order is awkward: 'that much of regular food' is incorrect. Place the degree modifier 'that much' after the object: 'into regular food that much.' Suggestion: 'I wasn't into regular food that much.'

× My friends actually encouraged me to grab a lot of chips and a lot of sweets.

✓ My friends actually encouraged me to grab a lot of chips and a lot of sweets.

This sentence is grammatically correct but could be more natural by removing repetition: 'a lot of chips and sweets' or 'many chips and sweets.' No subject-verb agreement error; included as clarification rather than correction.

× It's not the IT wasn't the healthiest thing in the world, but that was I was accustomed to.

✓ It wasn't the healthiest thing in the world, but I was accustomed to it.

The original has duplication 'It's not the IT wasn't' and incorrect word order 'but that was I was accustomed to.' Correct by removing duplicate phrase and placing 'it' as the object: 'I was accustomed to it.' Suggestion: 'It wasn't the healthiest thing in the world, but I was accustomed to it.'

× Yes, mainly old people in the world eat different food.

✓ Yes, mainly older people eat different foods around the world.

Use comparative adjective 'older' not 'old' for this general statement; 'people in the world' should be 'around the world.' Also 'different food' is better as plural 'different foods.' Suggestion: 'mainly older people eat different foods around the world.'

× Depends on the occasion and the holiday.

✓ It depends on the occasion and the holiday.

Sentence is missing subject 'It' to be grammatical. Add 'It' at the start. Suggestion: always include a subject with 'depends.'

× For example in Christmas holiday people people people prefer turkeys and sweets.

✓ For example, at Christmas people prefer turkeys and sweets.

Remove repeated 'people' and use preposition 'at' with 'Christmas' (or 'during Christmas'). Add a comma after 'For example'. Suggestion: 'For example, at Christmas people prefer turkeys and sweets.'

× Other in other times people like eat regular food.

✓ At other times people eat regular food.

Remove extra 'other' and change 'like eat' to correct verb form 'eat' or 'like to eat.' Use preposition 'at other times.' Suggestion: 'At other times, people eat regular food.'

× But in special occasions baby people change their food regimes.

✓ But on special occasions people change their eating habits.

'In special occasions' should be 'on special occasions.' 'Baby people' is incorrect — likely meant 'many people' or simply 'people.' 'Food regimes' is nonnative; use 'eating habits.' Suggestion: 'But on special occasions people change their eating habits.'

× Depends on the occasion.

✓ It depends on the occasion.

Again missing subject 'It.' Add 'It' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: always include subject for 'depends.'

× Yes, of course as I grow older my food preferences change it a lot.

✓ Yes, of course as I grow older my food preferences change a lot.

Remove extra 'it' which makes the sentence ungrammatical. 'Change a lot' correctly modifies 'preferences.' Suggestion: 'my food preferences have changed a lot as I have grown older' if referring to past-to-present.

× Uh, I prefer now more of a healthy meals, whereas back in the day I just preferred sweets and chips.

✓ Now I prefer healthier meals, whereas back in the day I preferred sweets and chips.

Use comparative adjective 'healthier' rather than 'a healthy meals' (article and plural mismatch). Also use past tense 'preferred' for past preference. Suggestion: 'I prefer healthier meals now.'

× Now I eat sweets, sweet and chips about in moderation.

✓ Now I eat sweets and chips in moderation.

Remove duplicated 'sweet' and correct word order: 'in moderation' follows the verb phrase. Suggestion: 'Now I eat sweets and chips in moderation.'

× I like to keep them in even low side of things I prefer to eat.

✓ I like to keep them on the low side when I eat them.

Original word order and phrasing is awkward and unclear. Use idiomatic expression 'on the low side' to mean small amounts, and place phrase after 'when I eat them.' Suggestion: 'I like to keep them on the low side when I eat them.'