食物— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite food?
考生
Well, when it comes to my favorite food, I would like to say that it is steamed fish. Since I was a child, my mother has often cooked this dish for me and for my family members. Steamed fish has also become a must when there is family gatherings.
考官
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
考生
When I was young, I enjoyed a wide variety of food, but when it comes to my favorite, I think it was sweet food. I enjoyed trying different kinds of sweet food. For example, I loved eating sweet fruits, chocolate, and candies.
考官
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
考生
Yes, I do. In China we often eat according to the seasons. For example, in autumn and winter we often eat meat to gain more energy. For example, we often eat beef, lamb and pork. In spring and summer we often have some fresh fruit and vegetables.
考官
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
考生
Yes, he has. I guess my favorite food has always changed with the places and the times in my life. For example, when I was in Guangzhou, my favorite food was the local cuisine.
評估
總分
Part 1
What is your favourite food?
分數: 82.0建議: 回答总体自然且内容相关，但可更直接开门见山，然后用一到两句具体细节支持并使用连接词以增强连贯性。注意句子数量不要过多，避免重复信息（如“for me and for my family members”与“family gatherings”意义重叠）。可以补充味道、做法或感受的具体描述来丰富内容。
範例: My favourite food is steamed fish. I have loved it since childhood because my mother always steamed it with ginger and soy sauce, which makes the flesh tender and aromatic. Also, we always serve it at family gatherings, so it reminds me of happy family moments.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
分數: 78.0建議: 回答清晰但略显重复，应在开头直接给出主题句，然后用一到两句用连接词详细说明并给出具体例子或原因，避免简单重复“enjoyed/liked”。可以说明为何喜欢甜食（口味、能量、庆祝时吃到等）以增加内容深度。
範例: As a child I preferred sweet foods because I loved the taste and energy they gave me. For example, I often ate ripe mangoes, chocolate bars, and candy after school, and sweets were also a common treat at birthdays and festivals.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答结构合理但重复使用“for example”，且可以用连接词使段落更连贯。建议合并示例句，增加具体菜式或节令食品作为细节，并简短解释原因（如气候或传统）。注意控制句子数量，避免冗余。
範例: Yes. In China people often follow seasonal eating: in autumn and winter we eat more warming meats like stewed beef or lamb to keep energy levels up, while in spring and summer we favour fresh fruits and salads such as watermelon and cucumbers because they are cooling and refreshing.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
分數: 70.0建議: 存在明显错误（使用了第三人称“he”），影响自然性与准确性；回答也较笼统，细节不足。建议先直接回答（Yes/No），然后用一两句具体说明变化原因并举一到两个具体例子（如某道广州菜名），使用连接词衔接。
範例: Yes, it has. My tastes changed depending on where I lived; for instance, when I lived in Guangzhou I fell in love with Cantonese dishes like steamed dim sum and white-cut chicken because they were light and fresh.
文法
× Steamed fish has also become a must when there is family gatherings.
✓ Steamed fish has also become a must when there are family gatherings.
原句中主语是复数名词短语 "family gatherings"，谓语从句使用了单数形式 "is"，导致主谓不一致。应使用复数谓语 "are" 与复数主语一致。建议在遇到主语为复数（如 "gatherings"）时，动词也用复数形式（are）。
× When I was young, I enjoyed a wide variety of food, but when it comes to my favorite, I think it was sweet food.
✓ When I was young, I enjoyed a wide variety of food, but when it came to my favorite, I think it was sweet food.
句子中描述过去习惯或过去情况，主句用了过去时（"When I was young"、"I enjoyed"），因此从句 "when it comes to my favorite" 应使用过去时态 "when it came" 与时间保持一致。时态不一致会使句子逻辑混乱。建议回溯到主时间点统一使用过去时。
× Yes, he has. I guess my favorite food has always changed with the places and the times in my life.
✓ Yes, it has. I guess my favorite food has changed over time and with the places I've lived.
第一句回答中使用了代词 "he" 指代食物，这是错误的代词使用。食物通常用中性代词 "it"。此外原句后半句时态与表达可更自然：用 "has changed" 或简单过去/现在完成时均可，但需保持代词和时态一致。建议用 "it" 指代事物，并把后半句改为更自然的表达如 "has changed over time and with the places I've lived"。
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