食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct minor grammar and avoid redundant phrases.

範例: My favourite food is ramen because I love the rich, spicy broth and springy noodles. For example, I often add vegetables like bok choy and mushrooms to make it healthier and more flavorful.

建議: Use correct tense and grammar (I was, not I were). Give a concise topic sentence and one specific reason or memory as supporting detail, using a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: When I was young, I loved French fries because they were crispy and easy to eat. For example, I remember buying them after school with my friends as a special treat.

建議: Avoid vague or contradictory remarks (e.g., “I don't like to eat anything”). Provide a clear main sentence and specific seasonal examples linked with reasons. Keep it natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I change my diet with the seasons. For instance, in summer I prefer light sushi and salads because it's hot, while in winter I enjoy hearty dishes like stews and roasted meats to stay warm.

建議: Use correct grammar and clearer phrasing. Give a brief topic sentence and one clear supporting detail such as a reason why it hasn't changed. Avoid awkward or incorrect expressions like “I'm not betrayed to.”

範例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed; I still love French fries because they are comforting and remind me of childhood treats. For example, I still choose them when I want a nostalgic snack.

× Ramen is usually a spicy food.

✓ Ramen is usually a spicy dish.

The word 'food' is not grammatically wrong, but 'dish' is more natural collocation when referring to a prepared item like ramen. This is a lexical choice rather than core tense issue; keep present simple for general truth.

× You can use vegetables to make that dish and inside of this dish you can see or taste noodles.

✓ You can use vegetables to make the dish, and inside it you can see or taste noodles.

Use of 'inside of this dish' is wordy and awkward. Replace with 'inside it' or 'in it'. Maintain modal 'can' + base verb and present simple for general statements. Combine clauses with a comma and conjunction for clarity.

× When I were young, my favorite dish was French fries.

✓ When I was young, my favorite dish was French fries.

The clause refers to a past time so use past tense. 'Were' is incorrect with singular subject 'I' in simple past; use 'was'. This is a subject-verb agreement in past simple.

× I used to love potatoes too, but my favorites were French fries.

✓ I used to love potatoes too, but my favorite was French fries.

Maintain past simple 'used to' for habitual past. 'Favorites' is plural but the speaker refers to a single preferred item, so use singular 'favorite' and match verb 'was'.

× Yes, of course. I eat different foods at different times of the year.

✓ Yes, of course. I eat different foods at different times of the year.

This sentence is correct. Present simple is appropriate for habitual actions; no change needed.

× For example, sometimes I love to eat sushi, sometimes I like to eat pizza, sometimes I don't like to eat anything, you know?

✓ For example, sometimes I love to eat sushi, sometimes I like to eat pizza, and sometimes I don't feel like eating anything, you know?

Original is mostly acceptable, but 'don't like to eat anything' is slightly unnatural; 'don't feel like eating anything' is more natural for expressing lack of appetite. Add 'and' before final item for smoother coordination.

× When I were a child, my favorite food was always French fries.

✓ When I was a child, my favorite food was always French fries.

As above, use past tense 'was' with singular subject 'I' for a past time reference. 'Were' is incorrect here.

× I'm not betrayed to French fries in the past time.

✓ I wasn't (or 'I am not') into French fries in the past.

The phrase 'not betrayed to' is incorrect. Likely intended meaning is 'not into' (not interested in) or 'was not used to' (not accustomed to). Also 'in the past time' is awkward; use 'in the past' and match tense: if talking about childhood use past 'I wasn't into French fries in the past' or 'I wasn't into French fries when I was a child.'