食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần giảm tiếng ấp úng và lỗi ngữ pháp, nói câu trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ: ai nấu, khi nào ăn, cảm giác khi ăn). Tránh lặp và dùng thì đúng (is made/was made).

範例: My favourite food is pho. My mother often makes it at home, and I like it because it is warm and comforting, especially on cold days.

建議: Cần dùng thì quá khứ đúng (I liked), loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng và nói rõ tên món ăn. Trả lời trực tiếp rồi đưa ví dụ cụ thể và lý do một cách ngắn gọn. Hạn chế dùng từ không chính xác (e.g., 'swift').

範例: When I was young, I liked sweet snacks like marshmallows and candy because they tasted fun and were easy to share with my friends.

建議: Cần trả lời rõ ràng có/không rồi giải thích với chi tiết cụ thể (mùa nào ăn gì). Tránh lặp từ và ấp úng, dùng cụm từ phù hợp như 'balanced diet' và 'seasonal vegetables'. Nên nêu ví dụ cụ thể (mùa hè ăn gì, mùa đông ăn gì).

範例: Yes. In summer I eat lighter foods like salads and seasonal fruits, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm after a long day at work.

建議: Cần diễn đạt rõ ý là 'Yes, it has changed' và nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao thay đổi (thói quen, sức khỏe, tiếp cận thực phẩm). Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa ('trains') và ấp úng. Thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể để minh họa (ví dụ: now prefer healthier options).

範例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I liked sweets, but now I prefer healthier, more balanced meals because I care more about nutrition and convenience.

× I have to, uh, I, I'd have to say my favorite food is pho because it's so convenient and treat the entreat, uh, umm, my mom uh, often make it a home and uh, it's make of make me feel comfort food and warm.

✓ I'd have to say my favorite food is pho because it's convenient and comforting; my mom often makes it at home and it makes me feel warm and comforted.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and verb form errors. 'often make' should be 'often makes' to agree with singular subject 'my mom' (subject-verb agreement). 'make of make me feel comfort food and warm' is ungrammatical; use 'makes me feel warm and comforted' or 'is comforting'. Combine ideas into clearer clauses and use correct verb forms. Suggestion: simplify into two clauses, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use appropriate adjectives (comforting) or past participle (comforted).

× When I were young, umm, uh, I, uh, when I was young, I often uh, like, uh, uh, it's a swift, uh, so this is sweet and uh, such as marshmallow and candy because it's uh, so, uh, uh.

✓ When I was young, I often liked sweets such as marshmallows and candy because they were sweet.

The sentence contains subject-verb agreement errors: 'When I were young' should be 'When I was young' (past tense of 'to be' with singular I). 'I often like' should be 'I often liked' to match past tense. 'marshmallow' plural should be 'marshmallows'. Also clarity: 'it's a swift' is incorrect; likely meant 'sweets'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and correct plural forms for countable nouns.

× In recent recent years, umm, in, in recent years, I, I, I think it's uh, uh, some, uh, it's uh, uh, some balance diet and vegetable because it's uh, uh, it's make me feel, uh, relieved. So it relieved straight after long work hour and uh.

✓ In recent years, I think I have been eating a more balanced diet with more vegetables because it makes me feel refreshed and relieved after long work hours.

The original mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms. Use present perfect 'have been eating' or present simple depending on meaning; 'it's make me feel' should be 'it makes me feel' (subject-verb agreement). 'balance diet' should be 'balanced diet'; 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables'. 'So it relieved' is wrong; use 'it makes me feel relieved' or 'it relieved me' depending on tense. Suggestion: choose a consistent tense and correct adjectives/adverbs (balanced) and plurality.

× Yes, definitely. I I want to change uh, to trains, uh, it's a lot of uh, more of accessible and uh, uh, balanced diet because it's uh, it's umm.

✓ Yes, definitely. I have changed to a diet that is more accessible and more balanced.

This response has tense and structure issues. 'I want to change' should reflect past change if the question asks about change since childhood; use 'I have changed' or 'My taste has changed'. 'to trains' is unclear and likely incorrect—replace with 'to a diet' or 'my diet'. 'more of accessible' is ungrammatical; use 'more accessible'. Suggestion: clarify meaning, use appropriate tense (present perfect for changes since childhood), and correct adjective placement.