食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more coherent. Start with a concise topic sentence stating your favourite food, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (why you like it and typical toppings). Reduce fillers (uh, um) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep answer under 5 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

範例: My favourite food is fried rice because it is quick to make and very satisfying. I especially like it with seafood and fresh vegetables for extra flavor and nutrition. For example, I often add shrimp, peas and carrots on weekends when I have more time to cook.

建議: Clarify what you mean and answer directly. Begin with a clear topic sentence about the type of food you liked as a child, then give 1–2 specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid unclear references and filler words. Use linking words like "when" or "because."

範例: When I was young I liked fast food and local street snacks. For example, I often ate fried dumplings and skewers after school because they were convenient and tasty. I usually had them almost every day when I came home.

建議: Make your answer structured and complete. State directly whether you change foods by season, then give specific examples for hot and cold seasons, and a reason. Use linking words like "in summer" and "in winter," avoid unfinished sentences and fillers.

範例: Yes, I do change my diet by season. In summer I prefer light and fresh foods such as salads, fruit and cold noodles because they feel refreshing. In winter I often eat hot soups and spicy dishes to stay warm and boost my appetite.

建議: Answer clearly whether your favourite food changed and explain how with specific details (what you ate before, what you prefer now, and why). Use linking words like "when" and "but" and avoid vague or incorrect words. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

範例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I often ate fast food and fried snacks, but now I prefer healthier options like grilled fish, vegetables and brown rice because I want to feel fitter and have more energy.

× My favorite food is fried rice, and because it's simple food, as players and especially like it with toppings such as uh seafood and fresh vegetable, uh weekend takes, Taco and uh nutrient, I often eat it.

✓ My favorite food is fried rice because it is simple, and I especially like it with toppings such as seafood and fresh vegetables; I often eat it.

The sentence has confused and incorrect pronoun and noun forms (plural/singular) and unclear referents. Replace 'it's simple food' with 'it is simple' and 'fresh vegetable' with plural 'fresh vegetables'. Remove unclear fragments ('as players', 'weekend takes, Taco and uh nutrient') which are not grammatical. Use 'I especially like it' to clarify the subject. Ensure nouns agree in number and pronouns clearly refer to 'fried rice'. Suggestions: simplify structure, use plural for countable nouns, and remove or clarify unrelated fragments.

× Umm, when I watching a impersonated week like Chengdu, I used to eat like a snake and maybe a fast food.

✓ When I was a child in a place like Chengdu, I used to eat snacks and fast food.

The original uses an incorrect verb form 'watching' and unclear phrase 'impersonated week'. Use past continuous or simple past for past habits: 'When I was a child' or 'When I lived there'. 'Eat like a snake' is not idiomatic; likely 'snacks' is intended. Use 'used to' with base verb 'eat'. Suggestion: use 'When I was' + time/place and 'used to' + base verb for past habits.

× Umm, when I watching a impersonated week like Chengdu, I used to eat like a snake and maybe a fast food. Uh, maybe. I I think that I always eat it every day, every time when I go home.

✓ When I was living there, I used to eat snacks and fast food. I think I ate them every day when I went home.

'Watching' is incorrect; use 'living' or 'being' if describing past residence. The second clause mixes present tense 'always eat' with past context; change to past 'ate' and 'went' to match past timeframe. Ensure consistent tense across related sentences. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when describing past habits.

× Yes, uh definitely. During the hot season I prefer to uh meal and fresh food because they are more refreshing.

✓ Yes, definitely. During the hot season I prefer light meals and fresh food because they are more refreshing.

'Prefer to meal' is ungrammatical; 'prefer light meals' or 'prefer to eat light meals' is correct. 'They are more refreshing' correctly refers to 'light meals and fresh food' but ensure noun form 'meals' is plural. Use appropriate collocations like 'light meals'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + noun phrase or 'prefer to' + verb, and choose collocations that fit (light meals).

× In good weather. I usually grow hot soup and spicy food since they help me to.

✓ In cold weather, I usually have hot soup and spicy food since they help me feel warmer.

Fragment 'In good weather.' is wrong contextually; likely means 'cold weather'. 'Grow hot soup' is incorrect verb choice; use 'have' or 'eat'. The clause 'help me to' is incomplete; add result 'feel warmer' or 'warm up'. Ensure complete sentences with subject, verb, and object. Suggestion: choose correct weather adjective and use suitable verbs for eating ('have', 'eat') and complete the result clause.

× Yes, I think that it quite a lot change when I washing.

✓ Yes, I think that it changed a lot when I was growing up.

Tense and verb forms are incorrect: 'quite a lot change' should be past 'changed a lot'. 'When I washing' needs past continuous or past participle construction: 'when I was washing' is still odd; the intended meaning is 'when I was growing up'. Use 'changed' for past change and 'was growing up' for the period. Suggestion: use past simple for changes that happened and 'growing up' to describe maturation.

× I umm, I used to eat lighting food and like fast food and UH-3 food.

✓ I used to eat light foods, such as fast food and processed food.

'Lighting food' is incorrect adjective; 'light food' or 'light foods' is appropriate. 'UH-3 food' is unclear; likely 'processed food' or 'junk food'. Use clear, standard adjectives and nouns. Ensure pluralization if speaking about types of food. Suggestion: replace unclear terms with common vocabulary ('light', 'fast food', 'processed food').

× So when I grab a I think a little bit to eat like healthy food.

✓ So when I grew up, I started to try to eat a little healthier.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical: 'grab a I think a little bit to eat like healthy food' is incoherent. Likely intended meaning: as I matured, they began to eat healthier. Use 'when I grew up' or 'as I got older' and 'started to eat a little healthier' for clarity. Suggestion: use clear temporal phrase for maturing and the verb phrase 'started to eat' plus adverb 'healthier'.