食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and directly name the dish first, keep sentences concise (max 3–4), correct vocabulary (e.g., name the food, toppings, ingredients) and avoid filler words. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas and give one specific reason or example of how you like it.

範例: My favourite food is sushi. I especially enjoy it on weekends because it’s simple but full of fresh flavours. For example, I like salmon and tuna sashimi with avocado and cucumber, which make each bite light and satisfying.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence saying what you liked as a child. Avoid irrelevant or incorrect words and reduce hesitations. Give one specific example (a dish or snack) and a brief reason why you liked it, using a linking word (because, so).

範例: When I was young I loved sweet snacks, especially chocolate biscuits. I ate them often after school because they were convenient and tasted good, so I preferred them to healthy options.

建議: Good structure: direct answer + reasons. Improve vocabulary and accuracy (e.g., ‘cold foods’ not ‘free food’), and use clearer linking words (for example, in summer/whereas in winter). Provide one concrete example of a seasonal dish.

範例: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer cold foods because they are refreshing; for example, I eat salads and cold noodles. In winter, however, I enjoy hot, spicy soups such as chicken noodle soup because they keep me warm and comfortable.

建議: Answer directly and give a clear comparison: what you liked before and what you prefer now. Use specific examples of foods and a reason for the change. Avoid filler sounds and incomplete phrases; use linking words like ‘but now’ and ‘because’.

範例: Yes, it has changed. As a child I preferred junk food like chips and fast food, but now I choose healthier options such as salads, grilled chicken and boiled eggs because I want to feel healthier and have more energy.

× My favorite food is on Friday and Winter ball because it's simple and full of flavor.

✓ My favorite meal is on Fridays and at winter balls because it is simple and full of flavor.

The original used 'food' awkwardly with time expressions and mis-capitalized 'Winter ball'. Use 'meal' for a specific eating occasion; pluralize 'Fridays' for habitual events and use 'at' with 'winter balls'. Also replace contraction 'it's' with 'it is' for clarity. Improve word choice and preposition usage to match meaning.

× I especially like it when we topping like sake as seafood and meat and fresh vegetables.

✓ I especially like it when we top it with ingredients such as seafood, meat, and fresh vegetables.

The sentence had incorrect verb form 'topping' and wrong preposition. Use the base verb 'top' for the action and the preposition 'with' to show what the dish is topped with. Use 'such as' to give examples and include commas to separate items in a list.

× Uh, and ethics are and.

✓ Uh, and I also like the variety of flavors and textures.

The original fragment 'ethics are and' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with a complete clause that conveys a likely intended meaning (appreciation of variety). Ensure subject and verb are present and meaningful.

× When I was in a YouTube like shampoo and uh, sick food when I umm, go home so so.

✓ When I was young I liked simple snack foods and comfort foods when I went home.

The original contains nonsensical words ('YouTube', 'shampoo') and a broken structure. Interpret likely intent (preference for simple/comfort foods in childhood) and produce a grammatically correct past-tense sentence with subject-verb agreement and proper verb form 'went'.

× No, I didn't prefer to eat like healthy food, so I think I'm passionate and like sweet food when I watch.

✓ No, I did not prefer to eat healthy food; I was more inclined to choose sweet foods when I watched TV.

Use proper past tense 'did not prefer' for habitual past preference. 'Like' as filler should be removed; use 'choose' or 'prefer'. Clarify 'when I watch' to 'when I watched TV.' Ensure noun plurality 'sweet foods' for general preference.

× Yes definitely. During the hot season I prefer to eat like free food because they're more refreshing.

✓ Yes, definitely. During the hot season I prefer to eat light foods because they are more refreshing.

Replace 'free food' (incorrect) with 'light foods' to express less heavy items in hot weather. Use 'they are' rather than contraction for clarity and ensure plural agreement between 'light foods' and 'they'.

× In a good weather I usually want a hot soup and spicy food and since they help me to fill warm and comfortable.

✓ In good weather I usually want hot soup and spicy food because they help me feel warm and comfortable.

Remove the article 'a' before 'good weather' and 'hot soup' (general reference). Use 'because' to connect clauses and correct verb 'feel' (not 'fill'). Ensure adjective order and completeness of predicate.

× Yes, when I watching I preferred uh, junk food, but now I'm more healthy food and I prefer umm, to eat uh, umm, reachable and salad maybe, uh, chicken, egg and maybe a.

✓ Yes, when I was younger I preferred junk food, but now I eat more healthily and prefer to eat salads, chicken, and eggs.

Use past continuous/past simple 'when I was younger' rather than 'when I watching'. Replace adjective 'healthy food' with adverb 'healthily' or phrase 'eat more healthily' to describe eating habit. Remove filler words, correct 'reachable' to 'vegetables' or omitted; here 'salads' fits. Provide a concise list of foods and correct punctuation and agreement.