食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 응답은 명확하지만 문법과 표현을 다듬고 구체적인 이유와 연결어를 더 사용하면 더 자연스럽고 설득력 있게 들립니다. 예를 들어 'I like the food made with flour and tomato' 대신 구체적인 요소(면의 식감, 소스의 맛, 치즈의 풍미)를 설명하고, 연결어(for example, because, so)를 사용해 문장들을 논리적으로 이어보세요. 또한 문장 수를 3~4문장으로 유지하면서 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요.

範例: My favourite food is tomato spaghetti with cheese because I love the combination of al dente pasta and rich tomato sauce. The sauce has a slightly tangy and salty taste that I find comforting, and the melted cheese adds a creamy texture. For example, I often add a sprinkle of Parmesan to enhance the flavour.

建議: 내용이 친근하나 표현 오류와 문장 완성도가 떨어집니다. 'I have Swiss teeth'는 의미가 불분명하고 문법적으로 부적절합니다. 과거 습관을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고 문장을 끝까지 완성하세요. 또한 구체적인 이유(comfort, reward, family tradition 등)를 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다.

範例: When I was young, I loved sweet foods like chocolate, candy and chocolate cake. I often drank milk with cake because it was comforting after school. Eating sweets made me feel relaxed and it was also a special treat for celebrations.

建議: 전달은 되었지만 계절과 음식의 이유를 더 명확하게 설명하면 좋습니다. 'winter and spring'에 딸기와 고구자를 함께 언급한 것은 계절성과 일치하지 않을 수 있으니 음식별 계절을 정확히 하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요. 또한 개인적인 선호 이유(맛, 신선도, 건강 등)를 추가하면 더 구체적입니다.

範例: Yes, I usually eat different foods each season because I prefer fresh, seasonal produce. For example, in winter I enjoy sweet potatoes for their warmth, while in spring I like strawberries because they're fresh and sweet. In summer I often eat watermelon to stay hydrated and cool.

建議: 좋은 응답이지만 문법과 어휘 선택을 다듬고 더 구체적인 비교를 추가하세요. 'I think it have changed'는 시제·주어 동사 일치 오류가 있고, 'food with more protein rather than carbohydrate' 대신 구체적인 음식 예시와 이유(건강, 에너지 관리 등)를 덧붙이세요. 또한 연결어(despite, now, whereas)를 사용해 변화 과정을 명확히 하세요.

範例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since I was a child. While I used to prefer sugary snacks and carbs, I now choose more vegetables and high-protein meals, such as grilled chicken salads and steamed vegetables, because I want to stay healthy and have more energy.

× I like it because I like the food made with flour and tomato.

✓ I like it because I like food made with flour and tomatoes.

The preposition 'with' is acceptable, but the noun 'tomato' should be plural 'tomatoes' to match general reference to ingredient; use 'food made with flour and tomatoes' for natural English. Suggestion: Use plural forms for countable ingredients when speaking in general terms, e.g., 'with tomatoes'.

× I have Swiss teeth so I love eating sweet things such as chocolate and candies.

✓ I have Swiss teeth, so I love eating sweet things such as chocolate and candy.

'Candies' is grammatical but in this context 'candy' (uncountable) or 'sweets' is more natural. Also missing comma before 'so'. Suggestion: Use 'candy' as an uncountable noun when speaking generally, or 'sweets' for plural countable concept, and include commas to separate clauses.

× Eating sweet things made me feel relieved when I.

✓ Eating sweet things made me feel relieved when I was a child.

The sentence is incomplete; missing the clause ending. Likely intended to refer to childhood, so add 'was a child'. Suggestion: Ensure subordinate clause is complete: 'when I was a child'.

× Perhaps I enjoy eating seasonal food depending on The Four Seasons.

✓ Perhaps I enjoy eating seasonal foods depending on the four seasons.

Use plural 'foods' for different seasonal items and lowercase 'the' and 'four seasons'. 'Depending on' is acceptable but 'depending on the season' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'foods' and lowercase common noun phrases; consider 'depending on the season'.

× Yes, I think it have changed.

✓ Yes, I think it has changed.

Subject 'it' with auxiliary 'have' requires third-person singular 'has'. Suggestion: For third-person singular subjects use 'has' not 'have'.

× For example, I eat salad and food with more protein rather than carbohydrate.

✓ For example, I eat salad and foods with more protein rather than carbohydrates.

Use plural 'foods' and plural 'carbohydrates' when speaking generally. 'Carbohydrate' should be plural or used as uncountable 'carbohydrate-rich foods'. Suggestion: Use plural forms or rephrase: 'foods higher in protein rather than carbohydrates'.