食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문법과 문장 구조를 바로잡고 구체적인 이유와 연결어를 사용하세요. 예: 주어-동사 일치 문제(“is eggs” -> “is eggs” OK but better 'eggs are'), 불완전한 문장(마침표 뒤 이어짐), 'simple menu'는 어색하니 'simple to make'로 바꾸고 'they don't make any waste'는 이유로 구체화하세요. 또한 2~3문장으로 간결히 정리하고 연결어(for example, because)로 논리를 명확히 하세요.

範例: I like eggs because they are simple to prepare and inexpensive. For example, I can make them quickly for breakfast without wasting ingredients.

建議: 시제 일치와 표현을 자연스럽게 고치세요. 과거에 대한 질문이므로 주절은 과거형을 써야 합니다. 반복 표현(‘I like’ 두 번)을 피하고 구체적인 예시나 이유를 추가해 문장을 확장하세요. 연결어(so, and, because)를 적절히 활용하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

範例: When I was a child, I really liked sweet foods such as candies and chocolates because they were treats my parents bought me. I still enjoy them occasionally.

建議: 문법(관사·대명사)과 어순을 바로잡고 반복을 피하세요. 자연스러운 표현으로 대답하고 이유와 예시를 덧붙이세요. 예: 'Most of the year' 사용, 'I eat the same foods' 또는 'I usually eat the same foods'처럼 명확히 말하고, 'because they are easy to make' 등 이유를 연결어로 설명하세요.

範例: Most of the year I usually eat the same foods because they are quick and easy to prepare. For example, I often have rice, vegetables, and eggs for dinner.

建議: 문장을 완성하고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 시제 일치(과거: 'liked')를 지키고, 마지막 문장은 불완전하므로 'have to do' 뒤에 동작을 명확히 적으세요(예: 'spit out the seeds' 또는 'cut it into pieces'). 연결어(because, so)로 이유를 자연스럽게 제시하세요.

範例: Yes. When I was a child I liked watermelon, but now I don't eat it much because I find it messy to cut and I dislike removing the seeds.

× My favorite food is eggs because that is simple menu and.

✓ My favorite food is eggs because it is a simple dish.

The student used 'that' and 'menu' incorrectly. Use 'it' to refer to 'eggs' (singular pronoun for the idea) and 'a simple dish' instead of 'simple menu'. Also remove the trailing 'and' which creates a sentence fragment. Suggestions: Use 'it' for referring back to a thing or idea and use 'a/an' before singular countable nouns ('a simple dish').

× They don't make any waste.

✓ They don't create any waste.

The verb 'make' is not wrong grammatically but 'create waste' is a more natural collocation. 'They' correctly agrees with 'don't'. Suggestions: Prefer natural collocations: 'create waste' or 'produce waste'.

× When I was a child, I really like sweet things, so I like candies and chocolates.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked sweet things, so I liked candies and chocolates.

The sentence refers to the past ('When I was a child'), so verbs should be in the past tense ('liked'). Mixing past and present creates a tense inconsistency. Suggestions: Keep verbs consistent with the time frame; use past tense for past situations.

× I still like that.

✓ I still like them.

The pronoun 'that' is singular and does not match 'candies and chocolates' (plural). Use 'them' to refer to plural things. Also 'still like' is present tense and correct for current preference. Suggestions: Match pronoun number to the noun it replaces: 'them' for plural.

× Almost of the year I normally eat same same food.

✓ For most of the year I normally eat the same food.

'Almost of the year' is incorrect; use 'for most of the year'. 'Same same' is colloquial repetition; use 'the same food'. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'same food'. Suggestions: Use 'for most of the year' and 'the same' for repetition/consistency.

× Eat same food.

✓ I eat the same food.

This fragment lacks a subject and article. Add the subject 'I' and article 'the' before 'same food' to form a complete sentence. Suggestions: Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb.

× Are easy to make menu.

✓ They are easy-to-make dishes.

Word order and nouns are incorrect. 'Menu' is a list of dishes; 'dish' fits better. Use 'They are easy to make' or compound adjective 'easy-to-make'. Also match plural 'they' to 'dishes'. Suggestions: Use correct noun ('dish') and match number; use 'They are easy to make' or 'easy-to-make dishes'.

× Yes, when I was a child I like watermelons, but now I don't really like watermelons because when I eat a watermelon I have to do.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I liked watermelons, but now I don't really like them because when I eat a watermelon I have to spit out the seeds.

First clause refers to the past, so use 'liked'. 'Watermelons' later is repeated; use 'them' as a pronoun. The original ends abruptly 'I have to do' — unclear action. Likely intended 'spit out the seeds' or similar; provide clear verb phrase. Maintain tense consistency. Suggestions: Use past tense for past preferences; replace vague 'I have to do' with a specific action like 'spit out the seeds' and use pronoun 'them' for plural.