食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更简洁自然，并注意主谓一致与时态。避免频繁停顿（uh）和重复。可以用1个主题句+1-2个支持句，使用连接词（for example, because）并给出具体细节，如喜欢哪些辣菜或原因的具体描述。

範例: My favourite food is spicy dishes because they stimulate my appetite and lift my mood. For example, I love Sichuan hot pot and spicy noodles because the bold flavors make meals more exciting and help me relax after a long day.

建議: 使用正确时态（past tense）并减少填充词。结构上用主题句说明喜好，再用具体例子或原因支持。可说明最喜欢的甜点并描述感觉或场合。

範例: When I was young, I liked sweet foods, especially cakes and candies. I remember eating birthday cakes with my family, which always made me feel happy and excited.

建議: 回答清晰且有例子，但要去掉多余停顿並用连接词让句子更流畅。可以加入更具体的细节，例如哪些蔬菜或为什么选择它们（健康、清爽）。保持句子不超过5句。

範例: Yes. For example, in winter I often eat hot pot because it keeps me warm and communal meals are comforting. In spring and summer I prefer salads and steamed vegetables like spinach and cucumbers because they are light and refreshing.

建議: 注意时态一致（use past tense for childhood）并避免重复。用一到两句说明变化及原因，可加上影响（e.g., social or health reasons）。用衔接词（however, now）让逻辑更清楚。

範例: Yes, it has. When I was a child I preferred sweet foods because they made me feel happy. However, now I prefer spicy dishes because they stimulate my appetite and add more excitement to meals.

× My favorite food is spicy food because the spicy food, uh, make me, uh, have the appetite and uh, they makes me and they make me uh, feel exciting and relax.

✓ My favorite food is spicy food because spicy food makes me have an appetite and makes me feel excited and relaxed.

原句多处第三人称单数动词使用错误。主语“spicy food”为不可数/集合名词，作整体时谓语应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。此外，句中“they makes me”主谓不一致（复数代词与单数动词），应统一为单数形式；“feel exciting”用法不当，应该用过去分词/形容词“excited”来表示人的感受；“and relax”需改为形容词“relaxed”。建议：主语为单数或整体时动词用第三人称单数，描述情绪时用“feel + 形容词”。

× Uh, when I was young, I like uh, sweet food, like cakes or, and like cakes and the sweet, uh, when I, when I ate some, I feel happy and exciting.

✓ When I was young, I liked sweet foods like cakes, and when I ate them I felt happy and excited.

句子时间状语为过去（"when I was young"），谓语应使用过去时，所以“like”应改为过去式“liked”，“I ate some”之后的感受也应使用过去时“felt”。另外，“sweet food”若泛指可用复数“sweet foods”或不可数“sweets”；“exciting”用来形容事物，表示令人兴奋，描述人的感觉应为“excited”。建议：注意时间状语决定时态；用“feel + 形容词”描述情绪时使用正确形容词形式。

× Yes, of course. Uh, for example, uh, in winter I eat, I, I eat hot pot because it makes me feel warm. Uh, in summer or in spring I usually eat vegetables.

✓ Yes, of course. For example, in winter I eat hot pot because it makes me feel warm. In spring or summer I usually eat vegetables.

此句主要时态为一般现在时，用来描述常态，动词形式总体正确。但表述上“in summer or in spring”词序不自然，通常按季节顺序说“in spring or summer”。建议：保持一般现在时描述习惯性动作，调整季节顺序以更自然。

× Yes, when I was a child I prefer sweet food because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. But when I get older I prefer spicy food, uh, because it makes my appetite, it opens my appetite.

✓ When I was a child I preferred sweet food because it made me feel relaxed and happy. But as I got older I preferred spicy food because it increased my appetite.

句首有过去时间状语“when I was a child”，应使用过去时“preferred/made”。第二句描述过去变化也应使用过去时“as I got older I preferred”。最后“it makes my appetite, it opens my appetite”用法不当，常用表达为“it increases my appetite”或“it whets my appetite”，且需与过去时一致。建议：根据时间点使用一致的时态，使用固定搭配表达“增加食欲”。}]}