食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve clarity and grammatical accuracy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article usage, remove hesitations, and avoid fragments. For example, say when you started liking it, how you make it, and a short opinion about its taste or texture.

範例: My favourite food is cheesecake. I have loved it since I was about three years old, and I sometimes bake it at home. Although it is a bit rich, I enjoy its creamy texture and sweet-sour flavor.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the food and complete your explanations. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct adjective forms (sweets, comfortable). Avoid incomplete sentences and finish your point about your parents. Add a brief reason or example.

範例: When I was young, I loved sweets, especially candy and cake. They made me feel relaxed after a long day because sugar cheered me up, but my parents worried about my teeth, so they limited how much I could eat.

建議: Answer directly and use correct grammar and linking words. State whether you do eat different foods, give specific examples of seasonal dishes, and mention who prepares them or why they are special. Keep it concise and complete.

範例: Yes, I eat different foods for special occasions. For example, at Lunar New Year we eat steamed dumplings and sticky rice cakes, while at Christmas we have roast chicken and cookies that my family prepares together.

建議: Give a clear contrast between past and present using linking words like 'but' or 'however'. Correct repetition and use of articles, and name specific foods you now like with a brief reason why your preference changed.

範例: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I disliked seafood such as sashimi, but now I enjoy it because I appreciate the fresh taste and delicate texture.

× My favorite food is cheesecake. I like it since I want UH-3 years old and I sometimes make it myself at home, but the IT is a little.

✓ My favorite food is cheesecake. I have liked it since I was about three years old, and I sometimes make it myself at home, but it is a little rich.

Errors: incorrect tense and time expression ('since I want UH-3 years old' should be 'since I was about three years old') and unnecessary capitalization ('IT') and missing adjective clarity. Reason: 'since' with a past time requires past tense 'was'. 'UH-3' is filler/misheard and should be rendered as 'about three'. Also 'is a little' is incomplete; add 'rich' to describe cheesecake. Suggestion: use 'have liked' or simple past 'liked' with 'since' often takes present perfect ('have liked') and write numbers in words or digits appropriately.

× When I was young I was a big fan of sweet. It made me relax and comfortable feeling after a busy day. But it is not good for my parents, so I definitely.

✓ When I was young I was a big fan of sweets. They made me feel relaxed and comfortable after a busy day. But they were not good for my health, so I definitely stopped eating them as much.

Errors: incorrect noun form ('sweet' should be plural 'sweets'), incorrect adverb/adjective usage ('made me relax and comfortable feeling' should be 'made me feel relaxed and comfortable'), pronoun reference and sentence fragment at the end ('so I definitely.' is incomplete). Reason: 'sweets' is countable plural when speaking generally; use 'feel' plus adjective 'relaxed' not verb 'relax'. The final clause needs a verb to complete the idea. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general preferences, 'feel' + adjective for sensations, and complete the sentence with a clear action.

× I eat some special food when it are was a celebration like New year holiday or Christmas. I would I like to prepare the special dishes for such event.

✓ I eat some special foods when there is a celebration, like New Year or Christmas. I like to prepare special dishes for such events.

Errors: mixed and incorrect verb forms and subject-verb agreement ('it are was a celebration' is wrong; use 'there is a celebration'), singular/plural inconsistencies ('food' to 'foods' or keep 'special food' but better 'special foods'), unnecessary auxiliary 'would' and extra 'I' in 'I would I like'. Reason: Use 'there is' for existence of an event, match singular/plural consistently, and avoid redundant auxiliaries. Suggestion: use 'when there is a celebration' and 'I like to prepare' for habitual actions.

× When I was child when I was a child I disliked seafood such as sashimi, but now the they're one of my favorite food.

✓ When I was a child I disliked seafood such as sashimi, but now they're one of my favorite foods.

Errors: missing article ('When I was child' should be 'When I was a child'), extra duplication ('when I was a child' repeated), unnecessary 'the' before 'they're', and singular 'food' should be plural 'foods'. Reason: 'child' needs the indefinite article 'a'; avoid repeating phrases; 'they're' refers to plural 'seafood items' so pair with 'foods'. Suggestion: remove duplicate phrase, include 'a', and use plural nouns when referring to multiple items.