食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give one or two specific reasons or sensory details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “their country cashew nuts”). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: My favourite dish is chicken cashew nut with egg fried rice. I especially like it because the cashews add a crunchy texture and the tender chicken is very flavorful. Moreover, a little chilli oil gives it a fragrant aroma that lifts my mood.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about childhood favourites; avoid filler words (“uh”) and irrelevant references to the present. Give one specific example and a brief reason or memory to make it natural and informative.

範例: When I was young, I especially enjoyed chicken saji with rice. I remember my family making it in winter because it was warm and comforting, and the spices made it feel like a special meal.

建議: Good structure and example — improve accuracy and vocabulary: correct grammar (e.g., “it keeps me warm”, “I try to eat”), use linking words (for example, in summer/whereas) and give one more specific seasonal example to strengthen content.

範例: Yes, I change my diet by season. For example, in winter I prefer fish and hearty stews because they keep me warm, whereas in summer I eat more fresh fruits and salads because they are lighter and refreshing.

建議: Begin with a clear direct answer, then give a concise reason and an example of how tastes changed. Correct grammar (use past tense and avoid repetition) and replace vague phrases with specific details.

範例: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. As a child I preferred plain, non-spicy foods like fries and simple snacks, but now I enjoy spicier, more complex dishes such as stir-fries with chilli and strong flavours.

× Basically I am a food lover person so I have tried different kind of cuisines but nowadays chicken cashew nut and egg fried rice are my favorite and their country cashew nuts and tender chicken.

✓ Basically I am a food-loving person, so I have tried different kinds of cuisine, but nowadays chicken cashew nut and egg fried rice are my favorites, with their country cashew nuts and tender chicken.

Errors: 'food lover person' is awkward; use the compound adjective 'food-loving'. 'different kind of cuisines' has number agreement and word choice issues: use plural 'different kinds of cuisine' or 'different kinds of cuisines'. 'favorite' must agree in number with plural items so use 'favorites'. 'their country cashew nuts' is unclear; 'with their country cashew nuts' clarifies the relationship. Suggestion: use hyphenated adjectives, pluralize 'kinds' and match noun numbers, and add a preposition for clarity.

× As I told before, I love to try different type of cuisine.

✓ As I told you before, I love to try different types of cuisine.

Error: 'different type' should be plural 'different types' to match 'different' which implies more than one. Also include 'you' after 'told' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: pluralize 'type' to 'types' and add the indirect object 'you' when appropriate.

× So, uh, I tried according to the season, uh, like uh, last winter's, uh, I loved to eat, uh, chicken saji with rice.

✓ So I tried foods according to the season; for example, last winter I loved to eat chicken saji with rice.

Errors: unnecessary possessive 'last winter's' should be the time expression 'last winter'. 'tried according to the season' is vague; 'tried foods according to the season' is clearer. Remove filler 'uh' and use simple past consistently. Suggestion: streamline the sentence, use 'last winter' as a time phrase and keep verbs in past tense.

× Yes, I usually try to eat different food at the different time of the year because seasonal fruit tastes fresher and more flavorful.

✓ Yes, I usually try to eat different foods at different times of the year because seasonal fruit tastes fresher and more flavorful.

Errors: 'different food' should be plural 'different foods' and 'the different time of the year' should be 'different times of the year' for natural pluralization. Suggestion: pluralize both 'food' and 'time' to reflect multiple occasions across the year.

× For example, I prefer fish in winter because it keep me warm.

✓ For example, I prefer fish in winter because it keeps me warm.

Error: Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'it' requires the third-person singular verb form 'keeps' not 'keep'. Suggestion: use 'keeps' for he/she/it in present tense.

× On the other side, I tired to eat fresh food and drinks.

✓ On the other hand, I tried to eat fresh food and drink.

Errors: 'tired' is incorrect; intended past tense of 'try' is 'tried'. Also the idiom is 'on the other hand' not 'on the other side'. 'drinks' can be 'drink' when paired with 'food' as uncountable; either 'drinks' (plural) or 'drink' (uncountable) is acceptable—choose 'drink' for parallel uncountable nouns. Suggestion: use correct past tense 'tried' and correct idiom 'on the other hand'.

× Yes of course I have changed my food as compared to past.

✓ Yes, of course my food preferences have changed compared to the past.

Errors: 'I have changed my food' is awkward; it's better to say 'my food preferences have changed'. Also use present perfect 'have changed' to show change from past to present; add article 'the' before 'past' or say 'compared to before'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'my food preferences have changed compared to the past.'

× When I was a child I just eat simple non spicy items because I I had no like spicy food so I just eat simple like fries and fast food.

✓ When I was a child I just ate simple, non-spicy items because I did not like spicy food, so I ate simple things like fries and other fast food.

Errors: Tense consistency and verb forms: use past tense 'ate' not 'eat'. Double 'I' is a typo. 'had no like spicy food' is incorrect; use 'did not like spicy food'. Add commas and hyphenate 'non-spicy'. Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense and use clear negative form 'did not like'. Use commas and hyphens for clarity.