食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически корректным. Избегайте множественного числа у неисчисляемых понятий (например, "food") и давайте чуть больше деталей: почему вы любите это блюдо, какие конкретно блюда вы имеете в виду. Постарайтесь не использовать лишние слова и уложиться в 2–3 предложения, используя связку для плавности.

範例: My favourite food is spicy Korean cuisine, especially kimchi and tteokbokki. I enjoy the bold flavours and the way the spice makes meals more satisfying.

建議: Ответ хороший по содержанию, но можно сделать его более компактным и разнообразить лексику. Укажите одну–две причины и, при необходимости, добавьте небольшую деталь о воспоминаниях. Используйте связку, чтобы предложение звучало плавнее.

範例: When I was young I loved the pancakes my mother made because they were soft and sweet. I still remember the smell in the kitchen and how excited I felt on weekend mornings.

建議: Ответ не отвечает прямо на вопрос о сезонности и содержит грамматические ошибки. Надо сказать, меняется ли ваш рацион с сезоном, и привести конкретный пример (например, супы зимой, салаты летом). Используйте связку и правильные формы глаголов.

範例: Yes, I do. In winter I prefer hot soups and stews, while in summer I eat lighter dishes like salads and grilled vegetables.

建議: Грамматика и словосочетания требуют исправления. Ответ должен прямо сказать, сохранился ли вкус, и объяснить причину. Используйте правильные времена и соединительные слова, чтобы объяснение было логичным и кратким.

範例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed because my mother still cooks the same delicious meals. Her cooking habits have kept my tastes the same since childhood.

× My favorite food is spicy Korean foods.

✓ My favorite food is spicy Korean food.

The noun 'food' here refers to a general uncountable category, so it should be singular and uncountable: 'spicy Korean food'. Use the uncountable form for general categories; alternatively, if you mean several distinct dishes, say 'spicy Korean dishes'.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> I liked pancakes, which my mom cooked in the kitchen because they were soft and sweet and so delicious.

✓ I liked pancakes that my mom cooked in the kitchen because they were soft, sweet, and delicious.

The original sentence largely used correct past tense but had an unnecessary comma before 'which' and a redundant 'so'. Use 'that' for essential clauses (pancakes my mom cooked) and keep past tense 'cooked'; remove 'so' before 'delicious' or keep one intensifier. Add commas between adjectives in a series.

× Now I eat food which my mom cook every day.

✓ Now I eat the food that my mom cooks every day.

Subject-verb agreement requires third person singular 'cooks' for 'my mom'. Also use 'the food' or 'food' with 'that' for a defining clause. Use 'that' for essential information and maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? -> My favorite food is not change.

✓ My favorite food has not changed.

The present perfect 'has changed' is required to describe a change that may have occurred between the past and now. 'Is not change' is ungrammatical; use 'has not changed' (present perfect) or 'didn't change' (simple past) depending on nuance.

× My mom cooking so delicious food every day and I'm so happy.

✓ My mom cooks such delicious food every day, and I'm very happy.

Use the simple present 'cooks' for habitual actions; 'cooking' without an auxiliary is incorrect here. Replace 'so delicious' with 'such delicious food' or 'so delicious' with an adverb like 'very' for clarity. Connect clauses with a comma and conjunction.