食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答题需要更直接的主题句，减少口头禅（如“uh”）和重复，同时用更准确自然的表达补充细节。可以把回答控制在3–4句内：先给出明确的喜好陈述，接着用1–2句说明原因并举具体例子或感受，使用连接词如“because”“so”使逻辑更连贯。注意发音和流利度，避免破坏语流的停顿。

範例: My favourite food is a seafood rice bowl. It's a Japanese dish that combines rice with various fresh seafood like salmon, tuna and squid, which makes it nutritious and high in protein. Because it's light and not oily, I don’t feel sluggish after eating it, so I prefer it for a regular meal.

建議: 回答要更精炼并使用更自然的时态和词汇，减少重复（如多次出现“like”）。先一句概括童年喜好，然后用一两句具体举例并说明原因或感受，使用连接词（for example, because）提高连贯性。同时注意名词和动词搭配（nutrition intake → nutritional content）。

範例: When I was young, I didn’t worry about nutrition and mostly ate whatever I enjoyed. For example, I often had pizza, hamburgers, crisps and lots of ice cream because they tasted good and made me happy. Looking back, I ate freely without thinking about calories or health.

建議: 回答应更明确并举具体且相关的例子，避免模糊和语无伦次的表述。先直接回答Yes/No并给出原因，随后用1–2个清晰的季节性食物例子（包含食物名和原因），使用连接词（for example, because）来组织句子。减少填充词和重复。

範例: Yes, I do. People often eat seasonal foods because they taste better and are fresher. For example, in spring many Japanese enjoy strawberries and in autumn people prefer fatty fish like mackerel because it's in season and more flavourful.

建議: 回答应更流畅并用更自然的表达比较过去与现在的差异。先明确回答，然后用1–2句对比过去与现在，给出具体改变和理由（例如更注重蛋白质、纤维或低油脂），并用连接词（however, because）增强逻辑性。减少重复和语气词。

範例: Yes, it has. As a child I preferred high-calorie junk food like sweets and burgers. Now I choose healthier options because I care more about balance and nutrients, so I eat more vegetables, lean proteins and fibre-rich foods to stay healthy.

× My favorite food would be seafood rice bowl.

✓ My favorite food would be a seafood rice bowl.

原句缺少不定冠词“a”。在英语中，單數可數名詞前需加冠詞或其他限定詞。此處“seafood rice bowl”為單數可數名詞，正確形式為“a seafood rice bowl”。建議養成在單數可數名詞前檢查是否需要冠詞的習慣。

× I like it because it's nutrition balanced.

✓ I like it because it's nutritionally balanced.

原句中“nutrition balanced”結構不正確。應使用副詞或形容詞+ed結構來修飾“balanced”，正確為“nutritionally balanced”或“a balanced nutrition”。建議學習常見複合修飾詞（如 nutritionally balanced, well balanced）。

× I think I can include the enough protein in my daily uh, diet and.

✓ I think I can include enough protein in my daily diet.

原句中“the enough protein”使用不當。‘enough’作限定詞時不與定冠詞“the”連用，且句末多餘連詞“and”。正確為“include enough protein”。建議記住enough用法：enough + 名詞（無需the）。

× So it doesn't let you feel, uh, greasy and maybe sluggish after eating it.

✓ So it doesn't make you feel greasy or sluggish after eating it.

原句使用“let you feel”不自然，且連詞搭配不當。“make someone feel”更常用於表達導致感覺，且應使用“or”連接兩個並列形容詞。建議使用固定搭配“make + 人 + 形容詞”。

× When I was young I didn't care so much about like how much nutrition I intake and like how much the calories are contained in the food.

✓ When I was young I didn't care so much about how much nutrition I took in or how many calories the food contained.

原句中“intake”作名詞使用錯誤，應用動詞短語“take in”；另外“calories”為可數復數，應使用“how many”。時態需保持過去（didn't ... took in / contained）。建議複習動詞短語用法和可數/不可數名詞區別。

× I just eat whatever I like.

✓ I just ate whatever I liked.

此句描述過去習慣，需使用過去式以與前文“When I was young”保持一致。將現在式“eat/like”改為過去式“ate/liked”。建議注意時間狀語對動詞時態的控制。

× It's like full of freedom to choose what to eat.

✓ It felt like I had the freedom to choose what to eat.

原句結構不自然，時態與表達不一致。描述過去應用過去式，且用“have the freedom to do sth”較自然。建議學習固定表達“have the freedom to + 動詞”。

× I like junk food and pizza, hamburger and also crisps.

✓ I liked junk food, pizza, hamburgers and crisps.

這裡描述過去喜好，需用過去式“liked”；多個可數名詞要保持數的一致，應用複數“hamburgers”。建議注意時態一致性與可數名詞複數形式。

× Dessert, so just everything that makes me happy and follow.

✓ Desserts — just everything that made me happy and that I followed.

原句“follow”用法模糊且缺少主語關係詞。若表達“follow my freedom to choose”，需重寫為清晰句子。此處用過去式“made”與關係從句“that I followed”更合適。建議避免片段句，保持完整主謂結構。

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? ... many people will choose, uh, what's popular during the, uh, this typical a specific season or, umm, the weather.

✓ Many people will choose what's popular during a specific season or depending on the weather.

原句中“during the, uh, this typical a specific season”冠詞與形容詞順序混亂，且“or, umm, the weather”前需用介詞短語“depending on”。應簡化為“during a specific season or depending on the weather”。建議理清形容詞和冠詞順序，以及常用介詞短語表達原因或依據。

× I mean also 'cause people to uh, change their tendency on, on their, on the food.

✓ I mean people also change their preferences about food.

原句存在多餘片段和代詞使用不當。“change their tendency on the food”不自然，應使用“change their preferences about food”或“change their eating habits”。建議使用常見搭配“preferences about/for”或“eating habits”。

× So like for example, in spring people always choose, uh, the fruit strawberry because it's just a match.

✓ For example, in spring people often choose strawberries because they're in season.

原句“the fruit strawberry”和“it's just a match”表達不清。“strawberries”作複數更自然，並用“in season”說明當季。建議學習常用固定搭配如“in season”。

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? ... when I was a child, I prefer uh, everything like junk food, high calories food and sweet food.

✓ When I was a child, I preferred everything like junk food, high-calorie food and sweets.

需用過去時“preferred”；“high-calorie”作複合形容詞需連字符，且“sweet food”常用複數“sweets”。建議注意形容詞構詞（連字符）和復數形式。

× But now I care more about my health and uh, uh, is it nutrition balanced or contain proteins or uh, fibers?

✓ But now I care more about my health and whether it is nutritionally balanced or contains protein and fiber.

原句結構混亂，應用連接詞“whether”引導名詞性從句；“contain”需用第三人稱單數“contains”與主語“it”一致；“proteins”與“fibers”通常用不可數形式“protein”與“fiber”或不加s。建議學習whether用法與主謂一致。

× So I would choose uh, something related to. Healthy food or uh, like clean green vegetables.

✓ So I would choose something related to healthy food, like fresh green vegetables.

原句句子被不必要的停頓打斷，且“clean green vegetables”不自然，應用“fresh”或直接“green vegetables”。刪除多餘句點並使句子連貫。建議保持句子完整，使用更自然的形容詞搭配。

× And I just think, umm, I just like what makes me healthier.

✓ And I just think I like what makes me healthier now.

原句中重複“just”可刪減，並加上“now”以強調現在的喜好。原句時態可接受，但表達更自然的簡化會更清晰。建議避免冗餘詞匯，提高語句流暢度。