食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接的で内容は理解できるが、いくつかの文法ミスと冗長な表現があり、詳細が不足しています。また、リンク表現や理由の説明をもう少し具体的にすると良いです。具体的には時制と前置詞（after dinner）、句の自然なつなぎ（although / even though）を使い、1〜2つの理由や頻度・感情を加えてください。

範例: My favourite food is chocolate. I usually have a small piece after dinner because it helps me relax, although I know it isn’t very healthy.

建議: 回答の基本はあるが、語彙の繰り返しや文法ミス（e.g. 'going staying', missing articles, pronoun reference）が目立ちます。より自然にするために、繰り返しを避けて具体的な例（どんなお菓子か、どのくらいの頻度か）を加え、接続詞で理由を整理してください。

範例: When I was a child I often ate snacks because my grandparents frequently gave them to me. For example, they would bring candies and biscuits every weekend, so I developed a sweet tooth.

建議: 内容は良いが、文法の誤り（'I I', 'always keen on' は不自然）と語の重複があるため流暢さが落ちます。季節ごとの具体性をもう少し出し、接続語で例をはっきりさせてください。また主語と動詞の自然な組み合わせに注意しましょう。

範例: Yes, I usually enjoy seasonal foods. For example, in spring I like eating sakura mochi and other traditional sweets with green tea because they match the season.

建議: 答えは明確で一貫していますが、表現をさらに自然にし、理由や将来の計画を具体的に述べると良いです。たとえば、どのように食習慣を変えたいか（頻度を減らす、健康的な代替を試すなど）を付け加えてください。

範例: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed because I’ve liked sweets since childhood. However, I’d like to improve my diet by eating less chocolate and trying healthier snacks like fruit or yogurt.

× I always eat chocolate after the dinner while it is not healthy.

✓ I always eat chocolate after dinner even though it is not healthy.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before general meals like 'dinner'. Use 'after dinner'. 'While' is better replaced with 'even though' to show contrast. Suggestion: omit 'the' in similar contexts and use appropriate conjunctions for contrast.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Student: When I was a child I used to eat snacks a lot as my grandparents gave me snacks a lot.

✓ When I was a child I used to eat snacks a lot because my grandparents gave me snacks often.

Repetition and awkward phrasing: 'did you like' is fine in question but 'gave me snacks a lot' should be 'gave me snacks often' or 'gave me a lot of snacks'. Use 'because' for reason. Suggestion: replace 'as' with 'because' and use 'often' or 'a lot' consistently.

× In addition, I was keen on going staying my grandparents house so it was not good for my.

✓ In addition, I was keen on going to stay at my grandparents' house, so it was not good for me.

Missing prepositions and possessive punctuation: 'going staying' should be 'going to stay', add 'to' and 'at' before locations. 'Grandparents house' needs possessive apostrophe 'grandparents''. 'for my' should be 'for me'. Suggestion: ensure correct verb patterns (go to stay), include necessary prepositions, and use possessive and correct pronouns.

× Yes, basically I tend to eat seasonal food. For instance, during spring I I always keen on eating sakura mochi and other Japanese Japanese sweets with green tea.

✓ Yes, basically I tend to eat seasonal food. For instance, during spring I am always keen on eating sakura mochi and other Japanese sweets with green tea.

Missing verb 'am' for adjective 'keen on' (need 'be' verb). Duplicate words: 'I I' and 'Japanese Japanese' are repeated. Suggestion: include appropriate auxiliary verbs with stative adjectives and remove duplicate words.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Student: My favorite food has not changed. This is because I've been into snacks and sweets since I was a child. However, I'd like to change my eating habit.

✓ My favorite food has not changed. This is because I've been into snacks and sweets since I was a child. However, I'd like to change my eating habits.

Plural form 'eating habit' should be 'eating habits' to refer to general patterns. Also 'I've been into' is acceptable but 'have liked' or 'have enjoyed' may be clearer. Suggestion: use plural for habitual behaviors and consider 'have liked' as alternative.