建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a little wordy and slightly repetitive ("many skyscrapers" and later "many tall ... buildings"). Make the response more concise and add a brief specific detail or example to make it more vivid. Use a linking phrase if you add a supporting detail.

範例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live close to the city centre. For example, a cluster of glass office towers and high-rise apartments lines the main avenue, which makes the skyline very impressive.

建議: Good direct answer and reason, but phrasing is slightly awkward ("those ones", "architecture structures") and a bit repetitive. Tighten the language, use a linking word to add a specific example of what you photograph and why, and keep it within four sentences.

範例: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially those with creative designs. For instance, I like to capture unique facades or ornate balconies because photos help me remember the details and share them with friends.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and vague references ("secret familiar", "look up to Goda"). Be specific: name or clearly describe the building, explain why you want to visit, and use linking words. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences and correct vocabulary (e.g. "architecture" vs "architectures").

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the Sagrada Família in Spain because I have heard many stories about its unique design. In particular, I want to see Gaudí’s intricate facades and the interior columns that resemble a forest, as photos online don't do it justice.

× Yes, there are many architectures I'd like to visit in the future and one of them is secret familiar in Spain because I've heard many stories about this beautiful and unique building.

✓ Yes, there are many architectural sites I'd like to visit in the future, and one of them is a famous site in Spain because I've heard many stories about this beautiful and unique building.

The noun 'architectures' is incorrect; use 'architectural sites' or 'buildings' (countable noun) (Grammar Problem Type ID 14). 'Secret familiar' is not grammatical; likely intended 'a famous site' (article error and wrong adjective order). Also added the article 'a' before 'famous site' and inserted a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct noun collocations ('architectural sites', 'buildings') and ensure appropriate articles and adjective order.

× Yes, I take photos of buildings, especially those ones with beautiful and creative architecture structures.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings, especially those with beautiful and creative architectural designs.

The phrase 'those ones' is awkward and unneeded; use 'those' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'Architecture structures' is redundant and unidiomatic; use 'architectural designs' or 'architectural structures'. Suggestion: use concise demonstrative 'those' and correct noun forms ('architectural designs' or 'buildings with beautiful architecture').

× I'd love to take a photo to keep the memory and to look back.

✓ I'd love to take a photo to keep the memory and to look back on it.

The verb phrase 'look back' needs the preposition 'on' and an object when referring to memories (Grammar Problem Type ID 10: Verb in the present participle form / also preposition use). Without 'on it' the phrase is incomplete. Suggestion: add 'on' and the object 'it' to make the phrasal verb correct: 'look back on it.'

× And additionally I look up to Goda.

✓ Additionally, I look up to Gaudí.

'Goda' appears to be a misspelling of the architect 'Gaudí' (pronoun/noun error classified under incorrect use of pronouns/names — Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Also 'And additionally' is redundant; use 'Additionally' and add a comma. Suggestion: correct the proper name spelling and avoid redundant connectors.