建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You answered directly and gave opinions, but your response was repetitive and lacked clear organization and varied vocabulary. To improve, start with a concise topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases like "I think" and use linking words (for example, "however" or "on the other hand") to connect contrasting ideas. Add one specific detail to make the answer more vivid (e.g., mention a nearby landmark or how tall buildings affect daily life). Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes — my neighbourhood is in the city centre, so there are many tall skyscrapers nearby. However, although they make the area feel crowded, they are convenient because they house offices, shops and apartments close to public transport.

建議: Your answer expresses preference clearly, but it contains grammar errors and awkward phrasing. Improve by using correct sentence structures, clearer comparative language, and linking words like "because" or "although." Give one specific example of a temple or museum you've photographed or would like to photograph to support your opinion.

範例: Not really — I prefer photographing temples and museums because I find historical architecture more interesting and full of details. For example, I enjoy taking photos of old temple carvings and museum exhibits because they show traditional art and stories.

建議: You answered the question but were uncertain and repetitive. Improve by starting with a clear statement, providing accurate information, and adding a reason with a specific detail (e.g., observation deck, view, design). Avoid filler words like "umm" and repeated "I think."

範例: I would like to visit Taipei 101 in Taiwan because it used to be the tallest building and offers an impressive observation deck with panoramic city views. I’m interested in its unique design and the chance to see how the city looks from that height.

× I think it's mostly common in big cities 'cause it is more practical to do so I think.

✓ I think it's mostly common in big cities because it is more practical to do so.

The phrase 'common' with 'mostly' is acceptable, but 'it's mostly common in big cities' is awkward; the main issue is redundancy and informal 'cause'. Also 'do so I think' repeats 'I think' unnecessarily. Improve by using 'because' and removing duplicate 'I think'. Suggestions: use 'because' for formal reasons and avoid repeating 'I think'.

× I don't like much seeing tall buildings, but at the same time it's convenient, so I think.

✓ I don't like seeing tall buildings much, but at the same time they're convenient.

Word order: adverb 'much' should follow the verb phrase 'seeing tall buildings'. Also 'it's convenient' refers to 'tall buildings' (plural), so use 'they're' instead of 'it's'. Remove extra 'so I think' for conciseness. Suggestion: place adverbs after the object and ensure pronoun agrees with plural noun.

× however I love taking temples or museums.

✓ however I love visiting temples or museums.

We use the verb 'visit' with places like temples or museums, not 'take'. 'Taking' is used with 'photos' or 'pictures'. Suggestion: use 'visit' for going to places and 'take' for taking photos.

× I think there's a much more interesting in taking ancient buildings than like tall build modern buildings.

✓ I think it's much more interesting to photograph ancient buildings than modern tall buildings.

Several issues: 'there's a much more interesting' is ungrammatical; use 'it's much more interesting'. Use 'to photograph' or 'to take pictures of' rather than 'in taking'. 'tall build modern buildings' is incorrect word order; use 'modern tall buildings' or better 'modern tall buildings' but 'modern tall buildings' is redundant—'modern skyscrapers' preferred. Suggestion: use correct dummy 'it' and proper verb forms and adjective order.

× It's boring.

✓ They are boring.

Refers back to 'modern tall buildings' (plural), so the pronoun should be plural 'they are' not 'it is'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to its antecedent.

× If I could think of 1 building to visit in the future, I think it will be the tallest building in the world.

✓ If I had to choose one building to visit in the future, I think it would be the tallest building in the world.

Condition: use hypothetical form. 'If I could think of' is awkward; use 'If I had to choose' or 'If I could choose'. Future in a hypothetical should use 'would' not 'will'. Suggestion: use conditional 'would' for hypothetical future choices.

× I think it's located in Taiwan.

✓ I think it's located in Taiwan.

This sentence is acceptable; no preposition error. No change necessary.

× Umm Tai Taipei 101 I think that's the name.

✓ Umm, Taipei 101—I think that's the name.

Run-on and disfluent speech; reorder to 'Taipei 101' as the building name and place 'I think that's the name' after a pause. Suggestion: present the proper name cleanly and add a short clause for uncertainty.

× I love to see it because it's famous for most tourists and also I'm interested to see.

✓ I would love to see it because it's famous among tourists and I'm also interested in seeing it.

Use 'among' with groups (famous among tourists) rather than 'for'. 'Interested to see' should be 'interested in seeing'. Also 'I love to see it' better as 'I would love to see it' for future desire. Suggestion: use 'interested in + -ing' and 'famous among'.