建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, clear answer first, then add one or two specific details. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and ensure correct grammar and word order. For example, mention how many or what kind of tall buildings and why they were built (business, residential, government). Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

範例: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home, mainly office towers and modern apartment blocks. For example, a new residential skyscraper and two glass office buildings have appeared in the last three years because the city is expanding and needs more housing and workspace.

建議: Answer directly with present habit or preference, then give a specific reason and an example if possible. Avoid asking the examiner questions. Use simple linking words such as “because” and “for example.” Improve grammar: use present simple (I don’t usually).

範例: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I prefer photographing people and nature. For example, when I walk in the city I only take a quick picture if a building has unusual architecture or special lighting.

建議: Give a direct answer and then expand briefly with a reason or an alternative. Even if you are not interested, name a type of building you might visit and why. This shows ability to support an opinion with a reason.

範例: Not really, but I would consider visiting a famous historical building if I had the chance. For instance, I’d like to see an old palace or cathedral because I enjoy learning about history and architecture.

× Yes, uh, nowadays, uh, in cities area, uh, all the skyline, uh, building and uh, uh, government are, uh, take a proper plan when they, uh, build this type of building.

✓ Yes. Nowadays, in cities, the skyline, buildings, and the government take proper planning when they build these types of buildings.

Problems: incorrect use of prepositions ('in cities area' -> 'in cities'), articles and noun forms, and word order. The original mixes singular/plural and has wrong preposition. Suggestion: Use 'in cities' or 'in the city' for location; use plural 'buildings' and 'these types of buildings' to match meaning; use 'take proper planning' -> better 'take proper planning' or 'make proper plans'. Maintain simple present tense for habitual actions.

× Uh, actually, uh, you know, usually I didn't, uh, do this actually, umm, because, uh, I don't know, I don't think so. Is it necessary to take a picture on those building?

✓ Uh, actually, you know, I usually don't do that because I don't think it's necessary to take pictures of those buildings.

Problems: tense inconsistency ('usually I didn't' mixes past with adverb 'usually' which requires present simple for habitual action), incorrect preposition ('take a picture on' -> 'take a picture of'), plural noun required ('those building' -> 'those buildings'). Suggestion: For habitual actions use present simple ('I usually don't do that'). Use 'take pictures of' or 'take a picture of'. Keep number agreement.

× Uh, no actually.

✓ No, not really.

Problem: short reply is acceptable but 'Uh, no actually.' is informal and slightly awkward. Suggestion: Use natural conversational short answer 'No, not really.' to sound more fluent. This is a style improvement within present tense usage.