建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Keep answers concise and reduce filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking word. For example, mention how many or what type of tall buildings and why they are notable.

範例: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For instance, several modern skyscrapers and apartment towers line the main avenue, which makes the area feel very busy and well connected to public transport.

建議: Avoid long, awkward sentences and choose precise vocabulary. Use a linking word to separate general habit from the exception, and give one concrete example of what you photograph and why.

範例: I usually don't take photos of buildings, but occasionally I do when I spot an innovative design. For example, I photographed a recently opened eco-friendly library because its green roof and curved glass facade looked unique.

建議: Be direct and avoid hesitations. Give one or two specific reasons why you want to visit, using linking words to connect ideas and adding a brief detail about what you expect to experience.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in the UAE because it is the tallest building in the world. I want to go to the observation deck to enjoy the panoramic view and take photos of the city skyline.

× Yes umm, I live in hustling and bustling city right now, so there are lots of tall buildings near my home, the place where I live umm.

✓ Yes, umm, I live in a hustling and bustling city right now, so there are lots of tall buildings near my home.

The sentence lacked the indefinite article 'a' before 'hustling and bustling city', causing an article error and slight noun phrase issue. Additionally, repeating 'the place where I live' is redundant. Use 'a' for a singular, countable noun phrase and remove redundancy for clarity. Suggestion: include the appropriate article before singular countable nouns and avoid repeating the same idea. ('English (Denmark)')

× I usually don't take photos of building, but if I see a new and a very good architectural building which is environmentally friendly and has a very unique styles, then I take a photo of the building for reconciling the good memory of the building.

✓ I usually don't take photos of buildings, but if I see a new or very well-designed building that is environmentally friendly and has very unique style, then I take a photo to remember it.

'Building' should be plural 'buildings' after 'photos of' (plural object). 'A new and a very good architectural building' is awkward: use 'a new or very well-designed building'. 'Which' clause is better as 'that is'. 'Unique' is absolute and should not be modified by 'very'; use 'very unique' is nonstandard, so 'very unique style' changed to 'unique style' or 'very well-designed'. 'For reconciling the good memory' is incorrect collocation; use 'to remember it'. Suggestion: match singular/plural, streamline modifiers, use idiomatic collocations. ('English (Denmark)')

× Umm yes, I want to visit the skyscraper in UAE which is Burj Khalifa and is very, uh, popular these days. I want to go on the top of it and see the world from the highest, uh, point.

✓ Umm yes, I want to visit the skyscraper in the UAE, which is the Burj Khalifa and is very popular these days. I want to go to the top of it and see the world from the highest point.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'UAE' and before 'Burj Khalifa' to specify the country and the famous building. 'Go on the top' is incorrect preposition; use 'go to the top'. Removing filler 'uh' and commas improves fluency. 'Highest point' is fine; keep present tense 'want' consistent. Suggestion: use correct articles with country abbreviations when needed, use 'go to the top' for locations, and avoid unnecessary fillers. ('English (Denmark)')