建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations, and give one or two specific details using linking words. Also correct grammar (e.g., plural/singular, word order) and limit to 3–4 sentences.

範例: Not really. I live in the countryside, so most houses nearby are only two or three storeys tall. For example, there are mainly detached cottages and small apartment blocks rather than high-rises, so the skyline is quite low.

建議: Answer directly, then give a concise reason and an example. Fix phrasing and redundancy (e.g., 'rarely take photos of everything' is unclear). Use linking words like 'because' or 'unless'. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Not really. I rarely take photos of people or objects because I prefer to enjoy the moment. However, if I see a truly beautiful scene or an impressive building, I will take a picture to remember it.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words for reasons and plans. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., remove extra 'is', refine 'although'). Provide a specific reason and a brief plan in 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes. I would love to visit the iconic Taipei 101 because, despite being Taiwanese, I have never been there and I want to see the view from the observation deck. If possible, I will go with my family or friends next holiday so we can enjoy the scenery together.

× Not really because I live in the countryside, so most of the house near, uh, near my house always uh, maybe two or three floors buildings.

✓ Not really, because I live in the countryside, so most of the houses near my home are only two- or three-floor buildings.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'most of the house' should be 'most of the houses' (plural). 'Near my house' repeated is redundant; combine to 'near my home'. Also word order and structure need adjustment: use 'are only two- or three-floor buildings' to agree with plural subject 'houses'. Use hyphenated compound adjective 'two- or three-floor'. Replace filler words for clarity.

× So it's not at all.

✓ So there are not many tall buildings.

The original 'So it's not at all' is ungrammatical and unclear. The question asked about tall buildings; a present-tense statement about their absence should be 'There are not many tall buildings.' This corrects 'there be' construction and uses present tense to match context.

× No, I rarely take photos of everything like even my family, friends or the buildings and food.

✓ No, I rarely take photos of anything, including my family, friends, buildings, or food.

'Everything' is incorrect here; 'anything' fits negative context. 'Like even' is informal and redundant; use 'including' for listing examples. Maintain parallel structure in the list and separate items with commas.

× I don't like to take photos unless the scenery is too beautiful for me too want to keep it.

✓ I don't like to take photos unless the scenery is so beautiful that I want to keep it.

The clause has incorrect structures: 'too beautiful for me too want to keep it' mixes 'too' and 'to' and wrong verb form. Use 'so ... that' to express degree and result: 'so beautiful that I want to keep it'. Also remove redundant pronoun 'it' if desired, but kept for clarity.

× Yes, absolutely. There's a building I really want to visit is the iconic Taipei 101 because although I'm a Taiwanese, I have never been to Taipei 101.

✓ Yes, absolutely. A building I really want to visit is the iconic Taipei 101, because although I'm Taiwanese, I have never been there.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'There's' with a cleft structure causing redundancy. Use 'A building I really want to visit is...' or 'There's a building I really want to visit: the iconic Taipei 101.' Also 'a Taiwanese' is awkward; use the adjective 'Taiwanese' without an article. Use 'there' to refer to Taipei 101 instead of repeating the name.

× So if I have time, I would plan a trip to go there with my friends and family to really see the scenery.

✓ So if I have time, I will plan a trip to go there with my friends and family to see the view.

When describing a likely future action conditional on having time, use 'will' rather than 'would' for a real possibility. 'See the scenery' is acceptable, but 'see the view' is more natural for a skyscraper; keep simple infinitive 'to go' and 'to see'.