建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文法と語順の誤りを修正し、より自然で簡潔な表現にすること。具体的には主語と動詞の一致（I live / Kyoto has）、不要な語の削除、理由を述べる際に接続詞（because / so / therefore）を適切に使う練習をしてください。また“Choto”の発音や地名の説明が必要なら簡潔に補足すると良いです。発話は3文以内でまとめ、情報を明確に伝えてください。

範例: No, there aren't. I live in Choto, and Kyoto has strict rules limiting building height to protect its traditional scenery. So most buildings around my home are low-rise.

建議: 発言をより流暢で自然にし、文法（主語・動詞、複数形）と語彙を改善してください。否定の表現は短くし、その後に理由を述べる際は接続表現（because / so / as）を使うこと。比較表現（I'd rather / I prefer）や複数形（animals, buildings）を正しく使い、具体例を一つ挙げると説得力が増します。回答は2〜3文で簡潔にまとめましょう。

範例: No, I don't usually. Buildings don't really impress me, so I prefer photographing the sky or animals because those images help me relax.

建議: 前置詞と名詞の単複、語順を直し、理由を自然につなげてください（visit the Peace Memorial Museum / because I'm interested in peace studies）。また“peace studies I've studied”は冗長なので簡潔に「because I study peace studies」または「because I'm interested in peace studies」と言う方がよいです。理由を短く具体的に述べ、場合によっては一つ関心のある展示を挙げて深さを出しましょう。

範例: Yes. I'd like to visit the Hiroshima Peace Memorial Museum because I'm studying peace studies and I'm interested in learning more about its exhibits on the atomic bombing and survivors' stories.

× No, they're not.

✓ No, there aren't.

The examiner asked about existence (Are there tall buildings near your home?). The correct short negative response uses 'there are not' contracted to 'aren't', not 'they're not'. Use 'there' for existence statements about things in a place. Suggestion: Answer existence questions with 'There is/There are' or their contractions: 'No, there aren't.' or 'No, there isn't.' as appropriate.

× That's because I'm living in Choto now and Kyoto have a strict rule of the buildings the tall of buildings to protect the scenery of Japan.

✓ That's because I'm living in Choto now and Kyoto has a strict rule about tall buildings to protect Japan's scenery.

Several present-tense and wording problems: use simple present 'Kyoto has' for a general fact (not 'have'), and correct article and word order: 'a strict rule about tall buildings'. Also use possessive 'Japan's scenery'. Suggestion: For general facts about places use simple present: 'Kyoto has a rule...' Use 'about' to indicate the subject of a rule, and place adjectives before nouns: 'tall buildings'.

× There are many low buildings.

✓ There are many low-rise buildings.

'Low buildings' is understandable but 'low-rise buildings' is the more natural collocation. The original has no agreement error but can be improved for naturalness. Suggestion: Use common collocations: 'low-rise buildings' or 'low buildings' is less natural.

× MMM actually I don't, that's because the building not impressed me a lot.

✓ Actually, I don't, that's because buildings don't impress me much.

Use simple present 'don't' for habitual states. 'The building not impressed me a lot' mixes forms; use 'buildings don't impress me much' for general preference. Use 'much' with negatives and use plural 'buildings' for general statements. Suggestion: For general preferences use simple present: 'Buildings don't impress me much.'

× I rather take a photo of sky or animal because it makes me relax.

✓ I'd rather take a photo of the sky or of animals because they make me feel relaxed.

Use 'I'd rather' (would rather) for preferences. 'The sky' and plural 'animals' are more natural, and pronoun agreement: 'they make me feel relaxed' or 'it makes me feel relaxed' depending on singular/plural. Also use 'feel relaxed' instead of 'relax'. Suggestion: Use 'I'd rather' + base verb. Match pronouns to their antecedents and use 'feel relaxed' for the state.

× Yes, there is.

✓ Yes, there is.

Answer 'Yes, there is' is grammatically fine for existence but needs to agree with the following noun. No change needed here. Suggestion: If you refer to 'a building', 'Yes, there is' is correct; you may also say 'Yes, there is one.' for clarity.

× I really want to visit to peace museums in Hiroshima.

✓ I really want to visit the Peace Memorial Museum in Hiroshima.

Use correct article and singular/plural: 'visit to' is incorrect—use 'visit' + object. 'Peace museums' is vague; likely singular 'the Peace Memorial Museum' is the correct name. Capitalize proper name and use 'the'. Suggestion: Use 'visit' without 'to': 'visit the museum.' Use proper noun forms for known places: 'the Peace Memorial Museum in Hiroshima.'

× That's because I'm interested in peace studies I've studied.

✓ That's because I'm interested in peace studies, which I've studied.

Run-on/confused clause: combine with a relative clause 'which I've studied' to show that you have studied peace studies. Also maintain tense consistency: present perfect 'I've studied' indicates past study relevant now. Suggestion: Use a relative pronoun to connect ideas: 'I'm interested in peace studies, which I've studied.'