建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 직접적이지만 문법 오류와 어휘 반복이 있어 자연스럽지 않습니다. 문장 구조를 간단히 고치고 구체적 정보를 추가하세요. 예: 건물의 용도(아파트, 사무실), 위치(집에서 얼마나 가까운지), 외관 특성(유리로 된, 현대적) 등을 덧붙이면 더 풍부해집니다. 연결어는 필요하지 않지만 한 문장으로 명확히 말하세요.

範例: Yes. There are two tall buildings near my home. They are modern glass office towers about a five-minute walk away.

建議: 대명사 사용과 시제, 단어 선택에 오류가 있습니다. 주어와 동사를 정확히 사용하고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어(so, because, which)로 이유와 효과를 자연스럽게 연결하고 문장 수는 1–3개로 유지하세요.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because photographing architecture makes me feel calm and happy. I enjoy capturing interesting shapes and reflections.

建議: 응답은 명확하고 적절하지만 더 구체적인 이유와 기대를 추가하면 좋습니다. 예: 건축 양식, 역사적 가치, 전망대 여부 등 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이고 연결어(because, and, also)를 사용해 이유들을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the Yuksom building because it has a unique modern design and an observation deck. I’d love to see the city view from the top and learn about its architecture.

建議: 문법(단수/복수 조화, 관사)과 표현을 다듬으세요. 구체적인 이유(뷰 외에 편의시설, 위치, 소음 등 장단점)도 함께 말하면 설득력이 높아집니다. 연결어(so, because, although)로 장단점을 자연스럽게 비교하세요.

範例: Yes, I would because a tall building would offer a beautiful view and more natural light. However, I might be concerned about noise or higher costs, so I would consider both pros and cons before deciding.

× There's big and tall.

✓ It's big and tall.

The student used 'There’s' which introduces existence (there is/are) and is not appropriate for describing a particular building already referenced. Use the subject pronoun 'it' to describe the building. Also contracted 'it is' -> 'it's' is fine. Suggestion: use 'it is' or 'it's' when describing a specific thing. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, they often do.

✓ Yes, I often do.

The examiner asked the student about their own habit. The student used plural subject 'they' which does not match 'I'. Use 'I' as the subject to agree with the speaker. Suggestion: match the subject to the person speaking (I do/not I does). Grammar problem type ID:27

× Photo makes me happy and relaxing.

✓ Taking photos makes me happy and relaxed.

The sentence lacks a proper subject and verb form. 'Photo' (a noun) should be replaced by the gerund phrase 'taking photos' to indicate the activity. 'Relaxing' is an adjective describing something that causes relaxation; the student meant to describe their own feeling, so use the adjective 'relaxed'. Suggestion: use gerund for activities and choose correct adjective to describe feelings. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes I do because tall building has a beautiful view so it makes me feel good.

✓ Yes, I do because a tall building has a beautiful view, so it makes me feel good.

English requires an article before singular countable nouns. 'Tall building' needs an article like 'a' or 'the' depending on context. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'a' for a general singular noun: 'a tall building'. Grammar problem type ID:22