建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and clearly. Give one concise topic sentence stating whether there are tall buildings, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (use contractions sparingly) and avoid confusing or incorrect phrases like “toilet building.” Use linking words if adding detail (e.g., “however,” “but,” “for example”).

範例: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home. However, in the city there is a famous skyscraper called Landmark 81, which people often visit as a landmark.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and give a brief explanation with a linking word. Use correct verb forms and plural/singular nouns. Keep it within 1–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I don’t own a phone. If I had a camera, I might photograph interesting architecture occasionally.

建議: Be specific and coherent: state the building and explain why you want to visit it with a reason or two. Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “so”) and avoid contradictory phrases like “I always visit” if you mean you want to visit.

範例: Yes. I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in Vietnam and offers great views from its observation deck. I’m curious to see the city from high above and learn about its architecture.

建議: Give a clear opinion and support it with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “also”). Fix small grammar errors and avoid overly short, disconnected sentences by combining related ideas.

範例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would offer beautiful views and lots of natural light. For example, I could wake up early to watch the sunrise and enjoy taking photos of the city below.

× No they aren't but my home is the toilet building but in the city it have a toilet building is landmark 81.

✓ No, they aren't, but my home is in a building near the toilets; in the city there is a toilet building called Landmark 81.

Multiple pronoun and sentence structure issues: 'No they aren't' lacks comma; 'my home is the toilet building' is ambiguous and likely wrong pronoun/reference; 'it have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and wrong pronoun for 'the city' (should use 'there is'). Also run-on sentence. Suggest breaking into clearer clauses and using 'there is' for existence and correct verb forms. Grammar problem types: 11 (prepositions), 27 (subject-verb agreement), 3 (There be issue).

× No I don't. I never take photo of building because I don't have phone.

✓ No, I don't. I never take photos of buildings because I don't have a phone.

Countable nouns require plural or an article: 'photo' and 'building' should be plural when speaking generally, and 'phone' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Use 'photos of buildings' for general habit. Grammar problem types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 22 (Article errors).

× Yes there is. I always visit. Landmark 81 is the the tallest building in Vietnam.

✓ Yes, there is. I visit it often. Landmark 81 is the tallest building in Vietnam.

'Yes there is' needs comma. 'I always visit' is vague without object—use 'I visit it often' to refer to the building. Remove duplicate 'the the'. Grammar problem types: 3 (There be issue), 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× Yes I do. It's very great. I sometimes look outside and take a photo. I always wake up early to look the sun.

✓ Yes, I do. It's great. I sometimes look outside and take photos. I always wake up early to look at the sun.

'Very great' is awkward; 'great' suffices. 'Photo' should be plural when speaking generally. 'Look the sun' is missing the preposition 'at' used with 'look'. Grammar problem types: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× I sometimes look outside and take a photo.

✓ I sometimes look outside and take photos.

When describing habitual actions, plural 'photos' is more natural. Present simple 'look' and 'take' are correct; only noun number needed. Grammar problem type: 1 (Singular and plural issue).