建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with grammar (countable nouns and articles) and avoid hesitation or repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples using correct forms. Use linking words if needed.

範例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a large department store and an office tower about three blocks away, both of which stand out in the skyline.

建議: Improve sentence structure and verb forms, and make descriptions more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and give one clear reason for taking the photo with specific details.

範例: Not often, but I did take a photo of a building last summer in Thailand. It was a high‑rise with a colorful glass facade, which reflected light in an attractive way, so I thought it looked special and snapped a picture.

建議: Use accurate vocabulary and avoid informal exclamations. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give 2–3 specific reasons using linking words. Correct word choice (e.g., 'famous' not 'harass', 'ornate' or 'distinctive' not 'fussy').

範例: Yes, I would like to visit a famous building in Thailand that has a colorful glass exterior. The glass panels reflect sunlight in fascinating patterns, so I want to see the effect in person and take better photos.

建議: Clarify and correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid repetition. Start with a direct statement, then give specific reasons with linking words. Replace unclear phrase 'quite lane at St. level' with a clear idea (e.g., 'quieter than street level').

範例: Yes, I would prefer to live in a tall building because I could enjoy panoramic views of the town, especially the night skyline. Also, higher floors tend to be quieter and receive more natural light, which I like.

× Yes, there are many tall building near my home such as department store and the. Department.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home, such as department stores and a department.

The noun 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to agree with 'many'. 'Department store' should be plural 'department stores' to match 'many' and the list. Added article 'a' before the final 'department' to make the phrase grammatical. Suggestion: make nouns plural when using 'many' and ensure articles are present for singular countable nouns.

× Yes, there are many tall building near my home such as department store and the. Department.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home, such as department stores and a department.

The fragment 'the. Department' shows incorrect and misplaced definite article 'the' and punctuation. Using 'the' without a following noun or context is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'a' for a single, unspecified department or omit the article if pluralizing ('department stores').

× Seldom, but if I'm not mistaken, I took a picture of a building last summer in Thailand.

✓ Seldom do I, but if I'm not mistaken, I took a picture of a building last summer in Thailand.

The original sentence begins with 'Seldom' which is a negative adverbial fronting that requires subject-auxiliary inversion in formal English ('Seldom do I...'). Alternatively, start with 'I seldom' for natural word order. Suggestion: use inversion when fronting negative adverbs or rephrase to 'I seldom...' for simplicity.

× There is a high rise building with the facade has colorful glasses.

✓ There is a high-rise building whose facade has colorful glass.

'High rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise' when used as a compound adjective. 'With the facade has' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'whose facade has' or 'with a facade that has'. 'Glasses' is incorrect for window glass; use uncountable 'glass'. Suggestion: use 'whose' for possession or 'with a facade that has' and use 'glass' as uncountable.

× I think it's interesting and special, so I took a picture.

✓ I think it's interesting and special, so I took a picture.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable. No correction needed. Keep descriptive adjectives 'interesting' and 'special'.

× If you ask me, I will say the harass building in Thailand, that's because it's fussy with colorful glass, reflects sunlight in a unique way and I see it's wow amazing and I want to visit it in the future.

✓ If you ask me, I would say the Harass building in Thailand, because it is covered with colorful glass that reflects sunlight in a unique way; I think it's really amazing and I want to visit it in the future.

Multiple issues: 'I will say' is less natural in this hypothetical; 'I would say' fits the conditional 'If you ask me.' 'Harass' may be a proper name and should be capitalized. 'That's because it's fussy with colorful glass' is incorrect vocabulary—'fussy' is wrong; use 'covered with' or 'decorated with'. The clause 'reflects sunlight...' needs a relative pronoun 'that' and proper conjunctions. 'I see it's wow amazing' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'I think it's really amazing.' Suggestion: simplify clauses, use 'would' for opinion, replace wrong adjectives with accurate descriptions, and connect clauses with relative pronouns.

× Yes, I prefer to live in high building because I can enjoy the scenery of the town, especially the night view in the evening and I I think they're quite lane at St. level so I prefer to live.

✓ Yes, I prefer to live in a high-rise building because I can enjoy the scenery of the town, especially the night view in the evening, and I think they're quite safe at street level, so I prefer to live there.

Several errors: 'high building' should be 'a high-rise building' (compound adjective and article). Duplicate 'I I'. 'They're' presumably refers to 'they' but context unclear—likely means 'they are quite safe at street level' but buildings are not 'safe at street level'; perhaps 'streets are safe' or 'I feel safe at street level'. Corrected to 'they're quite safe at street level' and added 'there' at the end to complete 'prefer to live there.' Suggestion: use articles for singular nouns, hyphenate compound adjectives, remove duplicate words, and ensure pronoun reference is clear.

× Yes, I prefer to live in high building because I can enjoy the scenery of the town, especially the night view in the evening and I I think they're quite lane at St. level so I prefer to live.

✓ Yes, I prefer to live in a high-rise building because I can enjoy the scenery of the town, especially the night view in the evening, and I think it's quite safe at street level, so I prefer to live there.

The phrase 'high building' needs 'a' and 'high-rise' as a compound adjective. 'They're' is a plural pronoun but the intended subject is singular ('it' or 'the area'), so change to 'it's' or rephrase. 'Lane at St. level' is unclear; likely 'safe at street level'. Suggestion: ensure number agreement between pronouns and nouns and use clear vocabulary for locations.