建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 注意时态和主谓一致，句子要更自然简洁。可把回答改成一到两句话的主题句加一两个具体细节，避免语法错误和重复。比如用现在时描述常态，并用正确的数词和代词。

範例: Yes. I live in a residential area with many apartment blocks — most of them are nearly 30 storeys high, so the skyline near my home is quite tall.

建議: 回答要更连贯，使用连接词并补充具体场景或原因，避免句尾不完整。使用更自然的词汇，例如 'take photos' 的延伸原因和频率。

範例: Yes, I often photograph interesting buildings when I travel, especially in large cities with impressive skylines. For example, in Beijing I like to capture the modern façades on my phone and share the best shots with my friends.

建議: 回答时先给出直接的主题句，然后用具体例子支持。纠正表达习惯用法（比如 'variety of' 后用复数名词和明确动词）。避免非母语式搭配如 'want to try' 用 'visit' 或 'see'。

範例: Yes, there are several buildings I'd love to visit. For example, I want to see the Eiffel Tower in Paris, and explore the distinctive, iconic architecture found in many Chinese cities.

建議: 注意表达清晰和用词准确。先给出直接回答，再说明两个具体原因，并用连接词使逻辑清楚。纠正不自然短语如 'the room moves in' 和重复词。

範例: Yes, I would. I enjoy living in high-rise buildings because they usually get more sunlight, which makes the apartment feel bright and uplifting, and they often offer nicer views that help me relax.

× Each of it almost have 30 floors.

✓ Each of them almost has 30 floors.

句中主语是 each of them，each 后跟单数动词；原句使用了代词 it（不合适）且动词用复数 have。应改为 each of them ... has，保证单复数一致并使用正确代词。建议记住 each of + 复数名词/代词，动词用单数。

× There are lots of apartments. Each of it almost have 30 floors.

✓ There are lots of apartments. Each of them has almost 30 floors.

两句合起来看，第二句与首句照应时应使用复数代词 them 而不是 it；each 要与单数动词 has 一致。原句存在主谓不一致与代词不当。建议检查先行词和代词的一致性以及 each 后动词单数规则。

× Yes I do, especially when I travel in other cities like some mega cities with skyline buildings.

✓ Yes, I do, especially when I travel to other cities, like some megacities with skyline buildings.

这里 travel 后常接介词 to 表示去某地；此外 megacities 合成词不需空格。原句中缺少介词，导致结构不自然。建议记住 travel to 表示前往。

× For example in Beijing there are lots of buildings with very stunning appearance and I will record them with my phone and send it to my friends or.

✓ For example, in Beijing there are lots of buildings with very stunning appearances and I record them with my phone and send them to my friends.

原句末尾以 or 结尾不完整，应去掉或补全；appearance 应用复数 appearances 与 buildings 对应；时态可用一般现在表达习惯性动作，且去掉多余的 will 更符合语境。建议避免不完整句尾，注意名词与先行词的数一致。

× Yes, there are variety of buildings I'd like to see in person.

✓ Yes, there are a variety of buildings I'd like to see in person.

短语 variety of 前通常需要冠词 a（a variety of...），原句缺少冠词导致不自然。建议记住固定搭配 a variety of 表示多种多样。

× For example in Paris I want to see the Eiffel Tower and in China every city has its own iconic architecture I'd want to try.

✓ For example, in Paris I want to see the Eiffel Tower, and in China every city has its own iconic architecture I'd like to see.

句子逻辑上最后应为想“看”或“参观”，用 I'd like to see 更自然；原句用 I’d want to try 语义不清且时态/搭配不当。建议使用固定表达 I'd like to see 或 want to see 来表达参观愿望。

× Yes I do, because in my point of view I think the room moves in.

✓ Yes, I do, because from my point of view I think the room faces inwards.

原句中的 the room moves in 不符合语义且动词短语错误。应使用固定表达 from my point of view，并用正确描述朝向的短语（例如 faces inwards 或 faces south 等）。建议学习常用表达 from my point of view 和表示房间朝向的动词短语。

× High building means the room full of sunshine and the sunshine just can make me feel refreshed and energetic.

✓ A high-rise building means the room is full of sunshine, and the sunlight can make me feel refreshed and energetic.

原句缺少冠词（a high-rise building），并且 room 后缺少系动词 is；sunshine 可用 sunlight，且 can 放在谓语前形成正常语序（the sunlight can make...）。建议注意英语句子中系动词的使用、名词前冠词及词汇搭配（high-rise building, be full of, sunlight, can + 动词）。