旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering it and contains grammatical errors (word order and article use). In Part 1 you should answer directly with a topic sentence and then add a brief, specific detail using a linking word. Keep answers natural and within 1–5 sentences. For example, start with: “Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car.” Then give a reason or detail: “because I enjoy seeing passing towns and countryside.”

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car, because I enjoy seeing passing towns and the countryside. For instance, on my last bus trip I watched people in small villages and it made the journey more interesting.

建議: You again replied by repeating and altering the examiner's question instead of answering. Also there are grammar mistakes (singular/plural and preposition use). Answer directly and add a brief supporting detail with a linking word. Be specific about when or why you take photos or why you don’t.

範例: Sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when the view is unusual or beautiful. For example, last summer I photographed a dramatic sunset over the hills from the motorway.

建議: Your reply simply repeated the question and used incorrect singular/plural form. In Part 1 you should state your preference immediately and give a short reason or example. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect your opinion with supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise.

範例: I prefer the sea because I find the beach relaxing and I enjoy swimming. For instance, I usually choose coastal holidays where I can relax on the sand and try local seafood.

× Do you look out the window at the scenery without traveling by a bus or car?

✓ Do you look out of the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car?

Original uses 'without' which changes meaning and is incorrect in context; the examiner asked about looking out while traveling, so use 'when' to indicate time. Use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' and use 'when traveling by bus or car' (no article before bus/car in general statements). Suggestion: replace 'without' with 'when' and drop 'a' before 'bus' and 'car'.

× Do you take photo of the scenery inside the car windows?

✓ Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

Original has 'photo' (singular) used uncountably and 'inside the car windows' which is incorrect location. Use plural 'photos' for general habit. Also the scenery is 'outside the car window' (not inside). Keep preposition 'outside' and use singular 'window' or plural 'windows' depending on context; here 'the car window' matches examiner's question. Remove 'inside'.

× Do you prefer the mountain or the sea?

✓ Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?

When comparing general preferences, use plural 'mountains' to refer to mountain environments in general. 'Mountain' singular suggests a specific mountain; use 'the mountains' to contrast with 'the sea'. Also keep article 'the' for both.