旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and clarity, correct verb forms and word choice, remove redundancy, and use linking words. Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (what you watch, how it makes you feel).

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I prefer a window seat because I enjoy watching the passing countryside, especially green fields and trees. It helps me relax and makes the journey more enjoyable.

建議: Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, comparative forms) and make the reason more specific. Use a linking word to connect the condition and the result. Keep it concise and natural.

範例: Sometimes I take photos, but not always because car windows are often dirty. As a result, the pictures look blurry, so I only take photos when the window is clean or the view is exceptional.

建議: Correct tense and article use, avoid repetition, and give a specific reason or example to support your preference. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer the mountains because I grew up in a seaside city and see the sea all the time. Mountains feel more novel to me and I enjoy hiking and the quiet scenery there.

× Yes I do, when I traveling by car or bus I like to watch outside, so I like to choose a seat close to the window.

✓ Yes I do. When I am traveling by car or bus, I like to look out, so I choose a seat close to the window.

The original uses 'traveling' without the auxiliary 'am' required for the present continuous tense. Use 'am traveling' for ongoing action. Also 'watch outside' is awkward; 'look out' or 'look out of the window' is correct. Remove unnecessary 'like to' repetition and use simple present 'choose' for habitual action. Suggestion: Use 'I am traveling' for actions in progress and 'I choose' for habitual preferences; use 'look out' not 'watch outside'.

× I eat especially enjoy watching some green planes, it will make me feel really relaxed.

✓ I especially enjoy watching green plains; it makes me feel really relaxed.

The phrase 'I eat especially enjoy' contains an extraneous word 'eat' and incorrect word order. 'Especially' should come before the verb 'enjoy'. 'Green planes' is likely incorrect word choice; 'plains' or 'fields' fits scenery better. Use simple present 'it makes' for habitual effect. Suggestion: Remove stray words, place adverbs before verbs, and choose correct nouns for context.

× Sometimes I do, but not always. You know the window are not clean at all the time, so it will make the quality of the photo worst.

✓ Sometimes I do, but not always. You know the windows are not clean all the time, so that reduces the quality of the photos.

'Window' should be plural 'windows' to match general reference, so use 'windows are' for subject-verb agreement. 'At all the time' is incorrect; use 'all the time'. 'It will make the quality of the photo worst' is ungrammatical; use 'reduces the quality of the photos' or 'makes the photos worse.' Use present simple for habitual facts. Suggestion: Match plural nouns with plural verbs and use correct comparative forms ('worse' or 'reduce quality').

× I prefer a mountain because I grow up in a seaside city so I can see the sea every day, so it would not surprise me.

✓ I prefer mountains because I grew up in a seaside city and could see the sea every day, so it would not surprise me.

Use plural 'mountains' when speaking generally. 'Grow up' should be past tense 'grew up' to describe past experience. 'Can see' should be past 'could see' to match past time frame. Maintain consistent tense: past for past background. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general preference and past tense for past experiences.

× Therefore, I think I prefer to see the mountains.

✓ Therefore, I think I prefer seeing the mountains.

While original is understandable, 'prefer to see' is less natural than 'prefer seeing' when stating general preference; both are grammatically possible but choose 'prefer seeing' for fluency. Present tense 'think' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'prefer seeing' for natural expression of general likes.