旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting reasons, and a short conclusion. Avoid filler sounds (uh, umm) and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas and give one specific detail or example (a place or scene) to make the answer concrete.

範例: Yes. I usually look out of the window because I love seeing nature, such as forests and rice fields, when I travel. I prefer travelling by bicycle to cars or buses because it lets me stop and enjoy the view more easily. For example, last month I cycled along a riverside and stopped to take photos of the sunset.

建議: Start with a direct answer and give a specific example. Use correct pronouns (I, me) and avoid repeating phrases. Explain briefly when and why you take photos and mention what you usually capture. Keep it to two or three clear sentences.

範例: Yes, I often take photos from the window when I travel because I like to keep memories of interesting landscapes. For instance, when I took a taxi to the countryside last year I photographed green terraces and small villages to share with my family.

建議: Answer directly with a clear preference and give one or two reasons. Correct unclear phrases (e.g. "I have never seen season") and use linking words (because, although). Provide a short personal example or imagined activity to make the response specific.

範例: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and quiet, cool air. For example, when I visit mountains I like to walk on trails and look at waterfalls, which I find more relaxing than lying on a busy beach.

× 'Yeah, I definitely what's uh outside the window is I love the nature most, so I mostly prefer to watch uh outside the window, but I don't like to travel much with umm, cars and buses.'

✓ 'Yes, I definitely look at what is outside the window; I love nature most, so I prefer to watch the view outside the window, but I don't like traveling much by car or bus.'

'Original sentence has confused and run-on structure, with missing main verb and awkward phrasing ("what's uh outside the window is I love the nature most"). Break the idea into clear clauses: state the action (look at what is outside), express preference (I love nature most), and explain travel mode dislike. Use "traveling by car or bus" instead of "travel with cars and buses" to sound natural.'},{