旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, dùng thì đúng (present simple), tránh từ thừa (ví dụ “darling”, filler sounds), và cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ (because, so, for example). Giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I often look out of the car window when I travel. I enjoy watching the changing landscape because it helps me relax and inspires me to take photos. For example, last month I took several pictures of rolling hills and a river during a road trip.

建議: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc, ngữ pháp (use of articles, verb forms) và tránh từ sai nghĩa. Nói rõ mục đích (to share on Instagram) và cách bạn chụp (quickly, through the window). Dùng liên từ như "so" hoặc "because" để nối ý.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of scenery from the car window because I like to share them on Instagram. I usually take quick shots through the glass and later choose the best ones to post for my friends to see.

建議: Cải thiện cách trả lời trực tiếp (chon một hoặc nói cả hai với lý do), sửa phát âm và loại bỏ từ không phù hợp/sai nghĩa (ví dụ “grief taking this girl”). Cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho mỗi lựa chọn và dùng liên từ (but, because, so). Giữ ngắn gọn và rõ ràng.

範例: I like both the mountains and the sea, but if I had to choose I would pick the mountains because I enjoy hiking and fresh air. However, I also love the sea for its peaceful atmosphere and beautiful sunsets.

× Oh darling, yes, I'm keen on watch, uh, the scenery when I go by by car, you know, because I'm a kind of, uh, beautiful landscape. So I just wanna take a lot of picture about the landscape out of my car.

✓ Oh darling, yes, I'm keen on watching the scenery when I go by car, you know, because I like beautiful landscapes. So I just want to take a lot of pictures of the landscape from my car.

The phrasal verb 'keen on' requires a gerund (verb + -ing), so 'watch' should be 'watching'. 'Go by by car' has a repeated word and should be 'go by car'. 'I am a kind of beautiful landscape' is incorrect; the speaker likely means they 'like beautiful landscapes' (adjective/noun agreement). 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' and 'a lot of picture' should be plural 'a lot of pictures'. Use 'of' or 'from' to indicate location: 'pictures of the landscape' or 'pictures from my car'. Suggestions: use gerunds after 'keen on', correct repetition, use plural nouns after quantifiers, and choose correct prepositions ('of'/'from'). Grammar problem type ID:8

× Obviously yards I would just want to take a lot of picture about uh, beautiful landscape out of out of my car and just bought it. Bought this on my Instagram to flick it with my friends and pasty.

✓ Obviously, I would just want to take a lot of pictures of beautiful landscapes from my car and then post them on my Instagram to share with my friends.

'Take' after 'want to' is fine, but 'a lot of picture' must be plural 'a lot of pictures'. 'About' is the wrong preposition; use 'of' to show what the pictures are of. 'Out of out of my car' is repetitive; 'from my car' is correct. 'Just bought it. Bought this on my Instagram' is incorrect: the intended meaning is to post or upload, not 'buy'. Use 'post them on my Instagram' or 'upload them to Instagram'. 'Flick it with my friends and pasty' is unclear; likely 'share with my friends' is intended. Suggestions: use plural nouns, correct prepositions, avoid repetition, and choose verbs that match the intended action (post/share). Grammar problem type ID:8

× Actually, Bob, because you know, I'm just a kind of person who really love, uh, grief taking this girl. So mountains and sea are really like gorgeous and I love both of them.

✓ Actually, because you know, I'm the kind of person who really loves taking pictures. Both the mountains and the sea are really gorgeous and I love them both.

Subject-verb agreement: 'who really love' should be 'who really loves' because the subject 'who' refers to 'the kind of person' (singular). 'Grief taking this girl' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely the speaker meant 'taking pictures' (gerund). 'Mountains and sea are really like gorgeous' has misplaced 'like'; say 'are really gorgeous' and 'I love both of them' is clearer as 'I love them both'. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with singular subject, replace unclear phrases with clear nouns (taking pictures), and avoid filler words like 'like' when not needed. Grammar problem type ID:27