旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and keep answers within 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail (when or where) and a linking phrase to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the changing views relaxing. For example, on long trips I often watch the countryside pass by and take a few photos. I then upload the best shots to my social media so friends can see my journey.

建議: Answer with a clear present-tense statement and concise supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct verb forms. Mention a specific example or frequency to make the reply more concrete.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window because photography has been my hobby since childhood. For example, I usually take dozens of pictures on weekend drives and keep the best ones in an online album for memories.

建議: Give a single clear preference or explain a balanced opinion with coherent structure. Use correct grammar (it depends), avoid repetition, and use linking words to compare (however, while). Provide a specific reason or short example for each preference.

範例: It depends on the situation: I prefer photographing mountains when I visit rural areas because I like dramatic landscapes, while I choose the sea when I want calmer, open views. For instance, last summer I photographed the rocky peaks near my village, but on a beach holiday I focused on sunsets over the ocean.

× Yeah, I enjoyed them scenario when I'm traveling bus or car, it's make me more hap happy.

✓ Yeah, I enjoy those scenes when I'm traveling by bus or car; they make me happier.

Errors: incorrect tense ('enjoyed' past vs present habitual), wrong plural/form ('them scenario' -> 'those scenes'), missing preposition ('traveling by bus or car'), subject-verb agreement ('it's make' -> 'they make'), adjective form ('hap happy' -> 'happier'). Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions, plural for multiple scenes, include 'by' with transport, match subject and verb, and use comparative 'happier' for increased happiness.

× At the same time I can took picture when I'm traveling and those pictures I can posted on social media.

✓ At the same time I can take pictures when I'm traveling, and I can post those pictures on social media.

Errors: incorrect past form 'took' after modal 'can' (should be base form 'take'), missing plural for 'pictures', incorrect form 'posted' after 'can' (should be base 'post'), word order. Suggestion: After modal verbs use base verb form, keep consistent plural/singular, and place pronouns correctly.

× Yeah, I took several time the outside scenery because photography is one kind of my hobby from my childhood and when I get a chance, I don't miss this opportunity because it's gives me a sense of satisfaction.

✓ Yeah, I have taken pictures of the scenery several times because photography has been one of my hobbies since childhood, and when I get a chance I don't miss the opportunity because it gives me a sense of satisfaction.

Errors: tense and aspect ('took several time' -> 'have taken... several times' for experience up to now), word order ('the outside scenery' -> 'pictures of the scenery'), article and phrasing ('one kind of my hobby' -> 'one of my hobbies'), preposition/time expression ('from my childhood' -> 'since childhood'), subject-verb agreement ('it's gives' -> 'it gives'), unnecessary commas. Suggestion: Use present perfect for life experiences, pluralize countable nouns, use 'since' with time points, and ensure correct verb agreement.

× Actually it's depends, When I'm in the countryside I I took preferred to mountains picture.

✓ Actually it depends. When I'm in the countryside, I prefer to take pictures of the mountains.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'it's depends' -> 'it depends' (present tense without 's' on 'depends' needs correct subject-verb), duplicated 'I I', wrong past tense 'took' instead of 'prefer', word order and prepositions ('preferred to mountains picture' -> 'prefer to take pictures of the mountains'), punctuation and capitalization. Suggestion: Use simple present for general preferences, remove duplicate words, use 'prefer to' + base verb, and include 'of' for objects of pictures.

× But when I'm in the suburb I usually prefer to take picture the mountain.

✓ But when I'm in the suburbs I usually prefer to take pictures of the mountains.

Errors: singular/plural ('suburb' -> 'suburbs' commonly plural), 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when speaking generally, missing preposition 'of' before object, article usage and plural 'the mountain' -> 'the mountains'. Suggestion: Use plural forms for general statements, and use 'take pictures of' + object.

× It's actually depend on when or what situation.

✓ It actually depends on the time or the situation.

Errors: verb agreement ('depend' -> 'depends' with subject 'it'), awkward phrasing 'when or what situation' -> clearer 'the time or the situation'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and rephrase vague expressions to natural collocations like 'depends on the situation' or 'depends on when it is'.