旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and simple sentence structures, avoid filler words, and keep to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences. Add linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) to make the answer logical.

範例: Yes, I often look out of the car window when I travel. For example, I usually ride with my husband and we drive to visit family on weekends, so I enjoy watching the passing houses and countryside. I find it relaxing because it helps me notice small details of the landscape.

建議: Answer clearly and give a specific reason and an example. Use complete sentences and correct prepositions (e.g., “out of the car window”, “when I travel to the countryside”). Avoid trailing off. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

範例: Yes, I often take photos out of the car window when I travel to the countryside. I do this because the views are unique and I like to keep memories of interesting landscapes, so I always have my phone ready to take pictures.

建議: Give a direct preference and support it with one clear reason and a specific example. Use correct grammar for opinions (e.g., “It depends on my mood” or “I prefer the mountains because…”). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking phrases like “for example” or “because”.

範例: It depends on my mood, but I usually prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and fresh air. For example, when I was at university I often spent a month hiking with friends, which was relaxing and healthy.

× Hey look on the outside of when I traveling by a car, I sometimes go up the road with my family, especially my husband like driving a car.

✓ When I travel by car, I sometimes look at the scenery outside and drive up the road with my family; especially my husband likes driving.

Multiple preposition errors ('look on the outside of' should be 'look at the scenery outside', 'traveling by a car' should be 'travel by car'). Also tense/verb forms were inconsistent: use simple present 'travel' and 'look' for habitual actions. 'Like driving a car' needed third person singular agreement 'likes'. Suggestion: simplify into shorter clauses and use 'look at' for viewing something outside and 'travel by car' for mode of transport.

× So we use I usually use a car at the moment.

✓ So we usually use a car at the moment.

Redundant subject 'we use I' is incorrect and creates a singular/plural conflict. Use one correct subject 'we' with plural agreement. Also 'at the moment' fits present continuous context but 'usually' indicates habitual action; keep 'usually' with simple present. Suggestion: remove the extra pronoun and keep consistent adverb placement: 'We usually use a car.'

× I love watching along the from my car window.

✓ I love watching the scenery from my car window.

Incorrect prepositions/phrases 'watching along the from' should be 'watching the scenery from'. Use the noun 'scenery' and preposition 'from' to indicate viewpoint. Suggestion: use 'watching the scenery' or 'looking out of the car window.'

× Yes, definitely. I usually take a photo out of window from a car and when I go to the some country at the moment, at that time I always take photos.

✓ Yes, definitely. I usually take photos from the car window, and when I go to another country I always take photos.

Incorrect phrase 'take a photo out of window from a car' — use 'take photos from the car window.' 'Go to the some country' is wrong; use 'another country' or 'some country' without 'the'. 'At the moment' conflicts with habitual 'always'; remove it. Also plural 'photos' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'from the car window' and correct article use for countries.

× That's why it is very important to.

✓ That's why it is very important to me.

Sentence is incomplete and lacks an object; 'important to' needs an object (e.g., 'to me' or 'to take photos'). Add the intended object to complete the sentence. Suggestion: include who or what finds it important: 'important to me' or 'important to take photos.'

× It's depend on my feeling.

✓ It depends on my feelings.

Subject-verb agreement error: in simple present third person singular needs 'depends' not 'depend'. Also 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to sound natural. Suggestion: use 'It depends on my mood/feelings.'

× I think it is a better to enjoy mountain the sea.

✓ I think it is better to enjoy the mountains or the sea.

Incorrect article placement and word order: 'a better to enjoy mountain the sea' is ungrammatical. Use 'better to enjoy the mountains or the sea' or 'better to enjoy the mountains than the sea.' Also add plural 'mountains' and include 'the' before specific nouns. Suggestion: decide comparison and structure properly: 'prefer the mountains to the sea.'

× That's why when I was a university student I used to go prime the month.

✓ That's why when I was a university student I used to go on trips during the term/months.

Original sentence contains unclear phrase 'go prime the month.' Likely intended 'go on trips' or 'travel during the month.' 'Used to' correctly indicates past habitual action, but the object needed correction and preposition 'on' for 'go on trips' and 'during' for time expression. Suggestion: clarify the intended activity and use common collocations like 'go on trips' or 'travel during the month.'