旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu: hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng 1-2 câu bổ sung có cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh. Tránh tiếng lắp và các từ thừa (ví dụ: "uh", "many, many"). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (ví dụ: "because", "so"). Bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về những gì bạn thấy để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

範例: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing landscape. For example, I like seeing green fields and small villages, which makes me feel relaxed and entertained during long journeys.

建議: Trả lời rõ ràng và ngắn gọn, chú ý chia động từ đúng (ví dụ: "I don't like taking photos"). Nên giải thích lý do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ thay vì nói chung chung. Dùng liên từ để nối lý do (ví dụ: "because", "so") và tránh lặp từ.

範例: No, I don't usually take photos of the view from the window because the pictures often look blurry. Instead, I prefer taking pictures when we stop at a viewpoint because I can get clearer and more interesting shots.

建議: Trả lời trực tiếp và chọn một ưu tiên hoặc nói bạn thích cả hai nhưng phải giải thích rõ ràng. Tránh số liệu vô nghĩa (ví dụ: "50,000"). Dùng cấu trúc so sánh và cung cấp lý do cụ thể kèm theo ví dụ. Giữ độ dài câu không quá 3–4 câu.

範例: I prefer the mountains slightly more than the sea because I enjoy hiking and the fresh air. For instance, I like climbing small trails to enjoy the views, but I also enjoy the sea for swimming and relaxing on the beach.

× Uh, I often see, uh, when I traveling by bus, by car, I think when you can see many, many things sign it beautiful. It's I feel very relaxed and I very enjoy.

✓ Uh, I often see, uh, when I am traveling by bus or by car, I think you can see many beautiful things. I feel very relaxed and I enjoy it.

Errors: missing auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'traveling' (use present continuous: 'I am traveling'); awkward noun phrase 'things sign it beautiful' and word order — should be 'many beautiful things'; incorrect word order 'It's I feel' and missing object for 'enjoy' — should be 'I feel very relaxed and I enjoy it'. Suggestion: Use correct auxiliary with -ing verbs (am/is/are), place adjectives before nouns, keep subject-verb-object order, and provide an object for 'enjoy' (e.g., 'it' or 'the view').

× I think I don't like take photo of the side scenery outside the car window because I see it's very simple and I think I like takes photo of the scenic outside.

✓ I don't think I like taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because I find it very plain, and I think I prefer taking photos of scenic places.

Errors: after verbs like 'like' and 'prefer' when expressing general preference, use gerund (taking) not base form (take); 'photo' should be plural 'photos' for general statement (quantifier); 'side scenery' is unnatural — use 'scenery'; 'I see it's very simple' is better as 'I find it very plain'; 'takes' is wrong form — use 'taking' or 'prefer taking'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'like'/'prefer' for activities, pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally, and choose collocations like 'scenic places' or 'the scenery'.

× Umm, I think uh 50,000 I like uh mountains and 50 thousands I like sea because mountain is very high and very beautiful. I can go out see.

✓ Umm, I think I like mountains and the sea equally because mountains are very high and beautiful, and I can go out to see them.

Errors: '50,000' and '50 thousands' are inappropriate quantifiers here — use 'equally' or 'half and half' to express preference split; 'mountain is' should be plural 'mountains are' when speaking generally; missing preposition 'to' before 'see' ('go out to see'). Suggestion: Use words like 'equally' to express equal preference, ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns, and include necessary prepositions like 'to' after 'go out'.