旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (e.g. "I go to travel" -> "when I travel").

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, when I go on holiday I often take photos or short videos of interesting views and then post them on Facebook or Instagram.

建議: Respond directly and clearly, use correct pronouns and grammar, and give a specific detail about how or why you take photos. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g. "because", "so").

範例: Yes, I often photograph the scenery from the car window because I want to capture interesting light and colours. I usually take pictures from different angles and in different weather conditions to get varied shots.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence fluency (e.g. "I like water" -> "I enjoy being near water").

範例: I prefer the sea because I enjoy being near water and relaxing on the beach. Also, I find the sound and movement of the waves calming, so I often go to the coast to unwind.

× Yes, why not? Why not? Especially I go to travel for visiting.

✓ Yes, why not? Especially when I travel, I go to visit places.

The original uses 'I go to travel for visiting', which is ungrammatical. This is a subject-verb construction issue and how actions are expressed in present habitual context. Use 'when I travel' (time clause) and 'I go to visit places' or simply 'I visit places' to convey purpose. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× So when I travel I take a picture or make a video and post it on my Facebook, Instagram, reels.

✓ So when I travel I take pictures or make videos and post them on my Facebook and Instagram reels.

Plural nouns are needed with general activities (use 'pictures' and 'videos' rather than singular). Also 'post it' should match plural ('them'). 'Reels' is a type of post on Instagram; include 'and' to connect platforms. This fixes verb-object agreement and appropriate pronoun reference.

× Yes, I take your photos when I go outside.

✓ Yes, I take photos when I go out.

'Your photos' incorrectly addresses the examiner; context implies the student takes general photos of scenery, so 'photos' without 'your' is correct. Also use 'go out' rather than 'go outside' for this context. Pronoun misuse corrected.

× I basically I take a photos either condition and take a photos from different angles.

✓ Basically, I take photos in different conditions and from different angles.

'A photos' is incorrect: 'a' cannot be used with plural 'photos.' Remove the extra subject 'I' and reorder to 'in different conditions' for clarity. Also combine the two 'take photos' phrases to avoid repetition.

× I prefer sea because I love beach and I like also water and I I love waves of the sea.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love the beach, I also like the water, and I love the waves.

Countable nouns 'sea' and 'beach' need definite articles in this general preference context ('the sea', 'the beach'). Remove the duplicate 'I' and streamline 'waves of the sea' to 'the waves' for natural phrasing. This fixes article use and plural/definite noun forms (IDs 1 and 22 combined; primary correction shown here focuses on plural/article usage).