旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接并且句子要简洁，避免语法错误。开头给出明确主题句，然后用1–2句具体细节支持。注意时态和主谓一致（例如 use 'I feel' 而不是 'I feeling'），把冗长或重复的部分删掉或合并。可以用连接词如 'because' 或 'and' 使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus because I find it relaxing. For example, I enjoy watching different shops and natural scenes pass by, which helps me unwind during the journey.

建議: 回答要先直接回应问题，然后给出简洁原因。注意短语搭配（应说 'I get carsick' 或 'I feel carsick'），并用一两个具体细节说明。例如说明何时或什么情况下会看风景而不是拍照。

範例: No, I rarely take photos from a moving car because I get carsick. Instead, I prefer to look outside and enjoy the passing landscapes, especially calm natural views that help me relax.

建議: 回答要明确并解释原因，避免不相关或模糊的词语（句中 'I'm afraid of the hat' 不清楚，应改为清晰理由）。用一句主题句加1–2句具体比较或描述，注意形容词使用和句子结构。

範例: I prefer the sea because its colours and sounds relax me. Compared with the mountains, the open view of the ocean and the gentle waves make me feel calmer and less anxious.

× Yes, I usually look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus because when the car moves I feel very comfortable when I looking out.

✓ Yes, I usually look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus because when the car moves I feel very comfortable when I look out.

句中使用現在時態描述習慣性動作，動詞應為原形或一般現在時形式“look”，而不是進行式“looking”。這是動詞+ -ing 形式誤用。建議：描述習慣或常態時使用一般現在時（I look）。

× When I choose to look out the window, many different views and shops sceneries that the natural scenes are so absorbed me very much.

✓ When I choose to look out the window, I see many different views, shops and natural scenes that absorb me very much.

原句結構混亂，缺少主語和正確謂語搭配，且名詞短語順序不當。屬於句子結構錯誤。建議：重組句子，明確主語（I）和動詞（see/absorb），並將名詞並列為清晰列表。

× No, I never take photos of the scenery because I have a car sick so sometimes I just look out the window to find the relaxing scene and natural backgrounds.

✓ No, I never take photos of the scenery because I get car sick, so sometimes I just look out the window to find relaxing scenes and natural backgrounds.

原句中“have a car sick”用法不正確，應使用短語“get car sick”或“am car sick”。這屬於冠詞/固定片語用法錯誤。建議：使用正確的固定搭配“get car sick”，並將可數名詞複數化以匹配語境（relaxing scenes）。

× I prefer the sea because I have a I'm afraid of the hat and the sea is white and blue.

✓ I prefer the sea because I'm afraid of heights, and the sea is blue and white.

原句中“I have a I'm afraid of the hat”是代詞與短語混亂，且單詞“hat”錯誤地替代了“height(s)”。屬於代詞/短語使用不當和詞彙錯誤。建議：使用正確表達“畏高” 的短語“I'm afraid of heights”，並整理句子使語意清晰。

× This scenery makes me feel relaxed more compared with the mountains.

✓ This scenery makes me feel more relaxed compared with the mountains.

“relaxed more” 的比較級位置不正確，應將“more”置於形容詞前形成“more relaxed”。屬於形容詞/副詞使用錯誤。建議：比較時把“more”放在形容詞之前（more relaxed）。