旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, grammatically correct, and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms, articles, and countable/uncountable noun forms, and remove filler words.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy watching the passing landscape whenever I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax and notice local life, such as farms, shops and street scenes.

建議: Answer directly, fix grammar and word choice, and give a specific reason or example. Keep it to two to three sentences and use linking words like because or so to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery while travelling because I enjoy preserving memories. For example, I usually photograph interesting buildings or sunsets and later share the best shots on my social media.

建議: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific, complete reasons. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, and) and provide one concrete example or brief comparison.

範例: I prefer the mountains because I find the scenery peaceful and fresh; for example, I enjoy hiking among the trees and watching clear sunrises over the peaks, which feels more relaxing than crowded beaches.

× Gazing out the window to saw the scenery in front of me when I'm traveling is my favorite things that I will definitely do every time I'm on the bus or a car and.

✓ Gazing out the window to see the scenery in front of me when I'm traveling is my favorite thing that I definitely do every time I'm on the bus or in a car.

Errors: 'to saw' uses past tense instead of base verb after 'to' (should be infinitive to see) and 'favorite things' is plural while referring to one activity (singular). Also 'on the bus or a car' mixes prepositions; use 'in a car'. Suggestion: Use the infinitive 'to see', change 'things' to 'thing', and use 'on the bus' or 'in a car' depending on vehicle (here keep both with correct prepositions). Ensure sentence ends without stray conjunctions. Grammar problem types applied: 8 (Verb + -ing form) for gerund/infinitive misuse and 1 (Singular and plural issue) for 'things' vs 'thing' and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) for 'on the bus or a car'.

× Yes, taking a picture of the scenery when I'm traveling is my favorite activity that I always do because it's like my hobbies and I always like to posting my traveling photos on social media.

✓ Yes, taking pictures of the scenery when I'm traveling is my favorite activity that I always do because it's one of my hobbies and I always like to post my travel photos on social media.

Errors: 'taking a picture' could be pluralized to match habitual action but is acceptable; main errors are 'it's like my hobbies' (awkward; 'one of my hobbies') and 'to posting' uses incorrect verb form after 'like to' (should be base verb 'post'). Also 'traveling photos' is better as 'travel photos'. Suggestion: Use 'one of my hobbies' and the infinitive 'to post' after 'like to'. Grammar problem types applied: 8 (Verb + -ing form) for incorrect 'to posting' and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) for 'like my hobbies' phrasing and word choice.

× I always prefer to traveling to the mountains because I love how mountain scenery is always breathtaking because of the trees and then the sky.

✓ I always prefer to travel to the mountains because I love how the mountain scenery is always breathtaking because of the trees and the sky.

Errors: 'prefer to traveling' uses incorrect form after 'prefer to' (should be base verb 'travel'). Missing article 'the' before 'mountain scenery' improves specificity. Remove redundant 'then' and use 'the sky'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer to travel' and include articles where needed. Grammar problem types applied: 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 17 (Incorrect use of the definite article).

× Also the sunset and the sunrise and the.

✓ I also enjoy the sunset and the sunrise.

Errors: Fragment sentence ending with 'and the.' is incomplete and lacks a clear verb and object structure. Suggestion: Combine with previous sentence or complete thought: 'I also enjoy the sunset and the sunrise.' Ensure full sentence with subject and verb.