旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., “when I travel”), avoid unclear phrases like “it's in very weird,” and replace vague comments with concrete descriptions of what you enjoy seeing and how it makes you feel.

範例: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by car. I enjoy watching changing landscapes, especially green fields and small villages, because they help me relax and make the journey more interesting.

建議: Provide a direct answer then give a specific reason and a brief example. Fix grammar (e.g., “I take photos” and “when I travel”), and replace unclear words like “text photo” and “this cannery” with accurate nouns. Mention frequency or what you photograph to make the response more concrete.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window. For example, I usually photograph old factories, rivers, or interesting buildings so I can look back at the views on my phone later.

建議: Give a clear preference in one sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct phrases (e.g., “I prefer the mountains to the sea” or “I prefer the sea”) and avoid unclear expressions like “pole up.” Be specific about what you like (e.g., quiet trails, fresh air, or sunsets) and keep it concise.

範例: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy quiet hiking trails and fresh air. For instance, climbing a small peak and watching the sunrise makes me feel peaceful and refreshed.

× I usually look out the window when I traveling by car because I love seeing the beautiful view and when I traveling by car I can see it's in very weird and it's making people and relax.

✓ I usually look out the window when I travel by car because I love seeing the beautiful view, and when I travel by car I can see it; it is very nice and makes people feel relaxed.

Errors: incorrect verb form after 'I' (should be base form 'travel' for present simple), incorrect use of 'it's in very weird' (unnatural phrasing and wrong adjective), and incorrect structure 'it's making people and relax'. Suggestion: use present simple 'I travel' for habitual actions, replace unclear phrase with 'it is very nice' or 'very beautiful', and use 'makes people feel relaxed' to express resulting state.

× Yes, I have text photo of this cannery outside the car window because it's very beautiful for me and I love to see beautiful view in my phone when I traveling by car.

✓ Yes, I have taken photos of the scenery outside the car window because it is very beautiful to me and I love to look at the views on my phone when I travel by car.

Errors: 'have text photo' is incorrect—use present perfect 'have taken photos' to indicate possession of photos taken in the past; 'cannery' seems to be wrong word for 'scenery'; 'when I traveling' needs base verb 'travel' in present simple. Suggestion: use 'have taken photos' for past participle usage, replace 'cannery' with 'scenery' and use 'look at the views' and 'when I travel by car'.

× I very loved mountain in the sea.

✓ I like mountains and the sea very much.

Errors: 'I very loved' mixes past tense 'loved' with adverb placement; also singular/plural and preposition issues ('mountain in the sea' is incorrect). Suggestion: use present simple 'I like' for preferences, place adverb 'very much' after verb, and use plural 'mountains' and 'the sea' as two options.

× I love pole up.

✓ I love to go hiking or to climb mountains.

Errors: 'pole up' is unclear and ungrammatical. Suggestion: replace with a clear activity that fits context, such as 'go hiking' or 'climb mountains', using infinitive 'to go' or 'to climb' after 'love'.

× It's it's make me because I love to see beautiful view and everywhere I think it is OK with me.

✓ It makes me happy because I love to see beautiful views, and I think being surrounded by nature is fine with me.

Errors: doubled 'It's it's', wrong verb form 'make' (should be 'makes' for third person singular), awkward clause 'everywhere I think it is OK with me'. Suggestion: use 'It makes me happy', ensure subject-verb agreement, and rephrase the second clause to 'I think being surrounded by nature is fine with me' for clarity.

× I love everything in my life.

✓ I love everything in my life.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple appropriately to express a general feeling; no change necessary.