旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and avoid irrelevant words (e.g. "scared of bus" is unclear). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing the landscape. For example, I remember a road trip last year where the mountains and rice terraces looked spectacular and felt very memorable.

建議: Answer directly and avoid filler words (uh, um). Use correct tense and concise reasons. Give a clear reason or one example of when you take photos. Keep to 1–3 sentences and include linking words such as "because" or "for example".

範例: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because I want to keep memories of beautiful views. For instance, I took several pictures of a colorful sunset on my last drive and later posted my favorites on social media.

建議: State your preference clearly then give specific reasons using coherent linking words like "because" or "so". Use correct comparative structure and clear vocabulary. Provide one or two concrete reasons or examples to support your choice.

範例: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful scenery. For example, I like hiking on trails near my hometown where I can see forests and valleys, which helps me relax and feel connected to my country.

× Yes, of course, I always looking at the window when I'm scared of bus because so very perfect scenery, especially when you trip. For me this is so very memorable.

✓ Yes, of course, I always look out the window when I travel by bus because the scenery is very beautiful, especially on trips. For me, it is very memorable.

Errors: 'always looking' should be 'always look' (incorrect use of verb + -ing for habitual action; use simple present). 'I'm scared of bus' is incorrect; context implies 'when I travel by bus' (sentence structure and meaning). 'so very perfect scenery' is ungrammatical adjective use and article missing; use 'the scenery is very beautiful'. 'when you trip' should be 'on trips' to match meaning and preposition. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions, include articles where needed, and choose correct prepositions ('on trips').

× Uh, yes, of course I always take a photo when I in a car. Uh, why? Because so, uh, especially perfect and uh, uh, maybe you know, uh, this is so population, uh, in a pen post.

✓ Yes, of course I always take a photo when I am in a car because the view is especially beautiful and sometimes I like to post the pictures online.

Errors: Missing verb 'am' after subject 'I' (sentence without a verb / present tense error). Phrases like 'Because so, especially perfect' are ungrammatical adjective/adverb use; replace with 'because the view is especially beautiful'. 'this is so population, in a pen post' is incorrect word choice and structure; intended meaning likely 'I post the pictures online' so use correct verbs and nouns. Suggestion: Include the correct form of 'to be' for present continuous/state, use clearer vocabulary ('view', 'post online') and keep simple present for habitual actions.

× So I more prefer the mountains because they are better so very quick.

✓ I prefer the mountains because they are much better for me.

Errors: 'more prefer' is incorrect—'prefer' already implies comparison; use 'prefer' or 'prefer X to Y'. 'better so very quick' is nonsensical combination of adjective and adverb; likely meant 'much better for me'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' without 'more', and use appropriate modifiers like 'much' or 'far' to strengthen comparison.

× And so I like when I saw in a home and see my country, my city forever with a call is I like.

✓ I also like it because it reminds me of home and my country and city, so I feel a lasting connection.

Errors: Fragmented and mixed tenses: 'when I saw in a home and see my country' mixes past and present and lacks clear subjects and verbs. Phrases like 'forever with a call is I like' are ungrammatical and unclear. Suggestion: Use a clear structure: state reason ('it reminds me of home'), keep tense consistent (present simple for general feelings), and express the lasting feeling clearly ('I feel a lasting connection').