旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 在回答中注意语法和句子完整性，避免重复和多余词语，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。可以先给出直接回答的主题句，然后补充具体细节（什么时候、喜欢拍哪些景色、为什么会分享到社交媒体）。尽量控制在最多5个句子内。

範例: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy taking photos of interesting scenes, such as city streets or countryside views, because they capture the mood of the trip. Afterward I usually upload the best pictures to social media to share with my friends and get their feedback.

建議: 回答需更清晰并修正词汇错误，避免卡顿词（uh）和重复。先直接回答，然后说明你拍哪些景物、如何选择“最好”的照片以及与朋友分享的方式，可使用连接词（for example, because, after that）让逻辑更流畅。

範例: Yes, I often take photos through the car window. For example, I capture landscapes or unique buildings and later choose the best shots by checking composition and lighting. Then I post them on social media to share with friends and ask for their opinions.

建議: 回答直接且明确，但可以通过添加具体原因和细节来丰富内容，例如说明为什么喜欢爬山、爬山时做什么或一次难忘的登山经历。使用连接词如 because 或 so 可以使答案更自然。

範例: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy hiking and the sense of achievement when I reach the summit. For instance, I often go on weekend hikes to enjoy fresh air and quiet scenery, which helps me relax and exercise at the same time.

× Yes, I like take photos from the windows.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos from the windows.

句中動詞 like 後應接動名詞 (verb + -ing) 表示喜好。正確用法是 "like taking"，而非不定式或原形動詞。建議多練習像 "like + -ing"、"enjoy + -ing" 這類結構。

× When I take bus or car I I can take photos and put on the photos in the social media.

✓ When I take a bus or a car, I can take photos and post them on social media.

原句有多處問題：缺少冠詞（a bus / a car）、重複字 "I I"、動詞搭配錯誤（應用 post photos on social media，而非 put on the photos in the social media），句子也需加逗號分隔時間狀語。建議注意冠詞用法，避免重複，並使用固定搭配 "post something on social media"。

× Yes, I like 2 photos of the senior outside the car window and the the, the best photos, uh, put on social media and communicate with my friends talk that, uh, my talk about my best photos.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of the scenery outside the car window, and I post the best photos on social media to share them with my friends.

此句有多重問題：應為 "scenery"（景色）非 "senior"；表達喜好用動名詞 "like taking photos"；"put on social media" 可改為更自然的 "post ... on social media"；句子結構混亂需重組為兩部分，用連詞連接並明確主語和賓語。建議學習常用詞彙（scenery, post）和動名詞用法，並把長句拆成簡潔的短句。

× I like the mountains rather than the sea.

✓ I prefer the mountains to the sea.

原句雖可理解，但更地道的說法是用 prefer A to B 表達比較喜好；若保留原句，冠詞使用是可以的，但需注意搭配。建議學習 prefer 結構和常見比較表達。

× I like to climb mountains.

✓ I like climbing mountains.

兩種說法其實都可，但為與前句保持一致，使用動名詞形式更自然："like climbing mountains"。若想強調目的或習慣，兩者皆可，但面試口語中動名詞更常見。