旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Упростите и структурируйте ответ: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных причины или примера. Избегайте повторов и заполнителей («uh»), используйте правильные формы глаголов и согласование (например, «I look» вместо «I looking»). Держите ответ в пределах 2–4 предложений и используйте связки (because, so, when) для логики.

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the scenery relaxes me. For example, I enjoy watching trees and small villages pass by, which helps me forget about stress. As a result, I often feel calmer during the trip.

建議: Сформулируйте ответ более грамотно и последовательно: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретный пример и эмоциональную реакцию. Исправьте грамматические ошибки (take photos, I feel nostalgic) и используйте связки (so, then, because) для плавности. Упражняйтесь сокращать количество предложений до 2–3, чтобы ответ был компактным и естественным.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of the view and post them on my Instagram story or send them to my friends and family. Later, I sometimes look at these pictures and feel nostalgic about those days, especially when the scenery was beautiful.

建議: Дайте чёткий выбор в начале ответа (mountains or the sea) и затем объясните причину или свой план. Избегайте бессмысленных фраз и ошибок (непонятное «Madam Maltese»). Используйте 2–3 предложения: одно — ваше предпочтение, одно — конкретная причина или пример, и, при необходимости, одно — будущее намерение. Применяйте связки (because, so, also) для связности.

範例: I prefer the sea because I love the sound of the waves and the relaxed atmosphere. However, I also enjoy mountains for their fresh air and views. In the future, I would like to live near the coast and have a small farm so I can enjoy both landscapes.

× Usually when I travel by bus or car, every time I look out the window and looking at the scenery, uh the view out of the window just call me and I feel safe and not stressing.

✓ Usually when I travel by bus or car, I always look out the window and look at the scenery; the view outside the window just calls to me, and I feel safe and not stressed.

The sentence mixes simple present verbs with a present participle incorrectly ('look' and 'looking') so use parallel verbs ('look' and 'look'). 'Call me' is incorrect intransitively here; use 'calls to me' to express attraction. 'Not stressing' is incorrect adjective use; use 'not stressed' to describe feeling. Avoid filler 'uh' and redundant phrases; use punctuation to separate clauses. Id:8

× Usually I take photo of the view and post in my Instagram story or send and show to my friends or my family.

✓ Usually I take photos of the view and post them in my Instagram story or send and show them to my friends and family.

Use plural 'photos' when referring to pictures in general. Include the object 'them' for 'post' and 'send and show' to be clear. Use 'friends and family' without 'my' repeated for natural English. Id:14

× Sometimes I'm looking at the pictures and nostalgia about that days.

✓ Sometimes I look at the pictures and feel nostalgic about those days.

'Nostalgia' is a noun; the correct adjective is 'nostalgic' or use the verb phrase 'feel nostalgia'. 'That days' is incorrect; use plural demonstrative 'those days'. Use simple present 'I look' for habitual actions. Id:12

× I prefer not only Madam Maltese, but also the sea.

✓ I prefer not only the mountains, but also the sea.

The original seems to contain a misused or incorrect noun 'Madam Maltese'; likely intended 'mountains'. Use the noun 'mountains' as the object of 'prefer'. Ensure the comparative structure 'not only... but also...' links parallel nouns. Id:13

× I love taking the picture of the view with mountains and the sea, and in the future I want to live near the sea and have a little farm or live in the mountains.

✓ I love taking pictures of views that include both mountains and the sea, and in the future I want to live near the sea and have a small farm, or live in the mountains.

Use plural 'pictures' and plural/uncountable 'views' for general statements. 'Little farm' is acceptable but 'small farm' is more natural. Maintain parallel structure when listing alternatives ('have a small farm or live in the mountains'). Id:13