旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且相关，但语法和表达有些问题，且句子略显冗长。可改进为更自然的主题句并用一两句补充细节。注意动词短语和冠词的使用（e.g. “worth seeing”而非“worth to catch”）。

範例: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing changing landscapes. For example, I like watching small towns and farmlands pass by, which helps me relax and notice local life.

建議: 回答意思明确，但句子不够流畅，有语法错误与冗余。应使用正确时态和冠词，并用连接词使句子更连贯。避免重复表述“because especially”。

範例: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially when we encounter particularly stunning views. For instance, I once photographed a dramatic sunset over rolling hills while driving to a friend’s wedding.

建議: 观点明确但表达含糊且有语法和重复问题。需要一个清晰的主题句，随后用具体原因和例子支持。注意单复数和词序（e.g. “mountains are often surrounded by trees, and many wild animals live there”）。

範例: I prefer the mountains because they are usually quiet and full of greenery, which feels refreshing. For example, hiking in the mountains lets me see birds and deer and enjoy peaceful trails away from the city.

× Yes, I usually look out the window at the scenery because when we are traveling, the sightseeing on the road is worth to catch.

✓ Yes, I usually look out of the window at the scenery because when we are traveling, the sights along the road are worth seeing.

问题类型：动词后接 -ing（gerund）错误。原句中短语“worth to catch”结构不正确，正确表达应为“worth + 动名词”，即“worth seeing”。此外将“the sightseeing on the road”改为更自然的“the sights along the road”，并把“look out the window”改为惯用搭配“look out of the window”。建议：记住“worth”后接动名词（worth doing），并使用更地道的名词短语。

× Yes, I would like to take photo of the scene outside the car window because especially when we met some amazing scenery.

✓ Yes, I would like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when we see some amazing views.

问题类型：动词后接 -ing 及其他时态搭配错误。原句中“take photo”应为复数或加冠词“take a photo”——此处用复数更合适；“the scene”改为更自然的“the scenery”或“views”。另外“because especially when we met”时态和连词使用不当，应该去掉“because”并用现在时“see”或“come across”。建议：注意“take photos”或“take a photo”的用法，且时间状语与动词时态一致（一般现在时用于习惯性动作）。

× I prefer the mountains because mountain also always surrounded by many trees and and a lot of wild animal live there so it's fun.

✓ I prefer the mountains because mountains are always surrounded by many trees and a lot of wild animals live there, so it's fun.

问题类型：单复数错误。原句中“mountain”应与前文复数“the mountains”一致，需使用复数“mountains are”。“a lot of wild animal”中的“animal”应为复数“animals”。此外句子缺少系动词“are”。建议：主语复数时动词要用复数形式，名词数量多时用复数。确保句子有完整谓语（如“are surrounded”）。