旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and correct grammar, be concise and add one specific detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating similar reasons. Correct plural/singular mistakes (e.g. 'on long journeys') and minor phrasing errors.

範例: Yes, I often look out the window, especially on long journeys, because it helps me relax and pass the time. For example, I enjoy watching the changing countryside and clouds because it distracts me when I feel a headache coming on.

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and coherence: correct collocations (e.g. 'take photos through the car window' is okay but say 'of the landscape'), fix tense and word choice errors (e.g. 'I don't have to pass' is unclear), and avoid unclear phrases like 'share with my family letter'. Use linking words to connect ideas and give one clear reason or example.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of the landscape through the car window, especially when we drive past mountains or the coast. For instance, I once photographed a village festival from the car and later shared the best pictures with my family online.

建議: Fix grammar and word choice (e.g. 'waves help', 'the salty air'), combine short sentences to avoid redundancy, and add a specific supporting detail or example. Use linking words to show cause and effect ('because', 'so').

範例: I prefer the sea because I love swimming and the sound of the waves helps me relax. Also, the salty air and bright sunshine lift my mood, so I always feel more peaceful after a day at the beach.

× Yes, I often look out the window at the scenery, especially on long journey.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window at the scenery, especially on long journeys.

The noun 'journey' here should be plural because 'on long journeys' refers to repeated occasions; also English commonly uses the plural after 'especially' when speaking generally. Use 'long journeys' to match the intended general meaning.

× I do this to pass the time and relax and also because I sometimes get a headache if I sit inside without looking outside.

✓ I do this to pass the time and relax, and also because I sometimes get a headache if I sit inside without looking outside.

This sentence mainly needs a comma to separate clauses for clarity; tense is correct (present simple to describe habitual actions). The correction improves punctuation to reflect natural spoken/written structure.

× Yes, I sometimes take many photos through the car window, especially when the landscape is beautiful such as mountain or coastal view.

✓ Yes, I sometimes take many photos through the car window, especially when the landscape is beautiful, such as a mountain or a coastal view.

Add articles 'a' before 'mountain' and 'coastal view' because singular countable nouns need an article. Also add a comma before 'such as' to introduce the example; 'many photos' is acceptable for a non-specific large number.

× I also like to photograph interesting events or village festival.

✓ I also like to photograph interesting events or village festivals.

'Festival' should be plural to match 'events' and to indicate more than one instance. Alternatively, use 'a village festival' for a single event. Make number consistent across the list.

× I haven't to pass because I enjoy capturing a lively scene to share with my family letter.

✓ I don't have to pass because I enjoy capturing lively scenes to share with my family later.

'Haven't to' is not correct in standard English; use 'don't have to' or 'do not have to'. Also 'family letter' is incorrect in context; likely meant 'later' or 'with my family' — here 'later' fits. Pluralize 'scene' to 'scenes' to match general activity.

× I prefer the sea mainly because I love swimming and the sound of the wave help me relax.

✓ I prefer the sea mainly because I love swimming and the sound of the waves helps me relax.

Subject-verb agreement: 'the sound' is singular, but the phrase 'the sound of the waves' is natural; then verb must be 'helps' (third person singular). Use plural 'waves' and 'helps' for correct agreement.

× The sea has a calming atmosphere.

✓ The sea has a calming atmosphere.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed; kept for completeness.

× The face salt the air and bright sunshine always make me feel happier and more peaceful.

✓ The fresh salty air and bright sunshine always make me feel happier and more peaceful.

'The face salt the air' is ungrammatical. Likely intended 'fresh salty air' or 'the fresh, salty air'. Use adjectives in correct order ('fresh' then 'salty') and adjective forms; 'salty' is adjective from 'salt'. Add commas as needed. Plural subject 'air and sunshine' takes 'make' which is correct.