旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but slightly long and could be more concise with a stronger topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking phrase to connect the contrast (car vs train/bus) and avoid repeating similar words. Also watch small pronunciation/fluency hesitations (e.g. "traveling" vs "travelling" consistency).

範例: I don't look out the window when I'm driving because I need to concentrate on the road; however, when I travel by bus or train I enjoy watching the scenery, especially rural landscapes and villages passing by, which I find relaxing.

建議: The idea is clear, but the answer has filler words ('uh') and repeats the same reason. Make the response more concise, give one clear reason and, if possible, a brief alternative or example (e.g. you take photos when stopped). Use a linking word to structure the sentence and remove hesitations.

範例: No, I rarely take photos from a moving car because they usually turn out blurry; instead, I wait until we stop or pull over so I can take clear pictures of the scenery.

建議: Your answer directly addresses the question and offers reasons, but it is slightly repetitive and could be improved by giving one specific detail or example about hiking and using a linking phrase to expand briefly. Avoid vague phrases like 'That's just what I like more.'

範例: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking — for example, I likemulti-hour ridge walks with friends, which let me appreciate nature and get good exercise.

× When travelling by car I try to keep my mind on the road and I don't look outside, but when traveling by train or by bus I always enjoy looking at the scenery.

✓ When travelling by car, I try to keep my mind on the road and I don't look outside, but when travelling by train or by bus, I always enjoy looking at the scenery.

The sentence mixes British spelling 'travelling' with American 'traveling'. Choose one form for consistency. Also add commas after introductory phrases ('When travelling by car' and 'when travelling by train or by bus') to improve clarity and punctuation. Suggestion: use consistent spelling (either 'travelling' or 'traveling') and include commas after introductory clauses.

× No, I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because the photos are not too good, uh, when you make them from a moving car, uh, and especially if you're making them through the window.

✓ No, I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because photos are not very good when you take them from a moving car, especially if you take them through the window.

Remove unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'photos' to make the statement general. Replace colloquial 'uh' with nothing for formal clarity. Use 'take' instead of 'make' for photos (correct verb collocation). Replace 'not too good' with 'not very good' for naturalness. Ensure consistent verb forms ('you take them' and 'you take them through the window').

× I prefer mountains because I like hiking.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I like hiking.

When speaking about a general category of geographical features like mountain ranges, English commonly uses the definite article 'the' ('the mountains'). Adding 'the' makes the preference clearer and more natural.

× I like to walk long distances, especially with company.

✓ I like walking long distances, especially with company.

Both 'I like to walk' and 'I like walking' are grammatically correct, but 'I like walking long distances' sounds more natural and concise. No major grammar error, only stylistic improvement: use gerund for habitual activities.

× That's just what I like more.

✓ That's just what I like more about it.

The original sentence is vague and slightly awkward. Adding 'about it' clarifies the object of 'like more.' Alternatively, say 'I like that more' for clarity. This is a sentence structure/style improvement rather than a strict grammar error.