旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, avoid redundancy, and add one brief specific detail using a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, I like watching passing parks and old buildings, which makes the journey more interesting.

建議: Correct verb forms and article usage, and make the response concise. State the general habit, then give one specific example connected with a linking phrase.

範例: Not usually, but if I see a particularly beautiful view I will take a photo. For instance, I often photograph colorful sunsets or unusual architecture when they catch my eye.

建議: Avoid repetition and hesitations, use correct vocabulary (e.g. 'sea' not 'prefer to prefer', 'waves' or 'sea' rather than 'whale' if incorrect), and organize into a clear topic sentence plus 2 supporting details linked coherently. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer the sea because the sound of the waves and the cool breeze help me relax. In particular, I love watching sunsets over the water, when the sky turns pink and orange — it creates a breathtaking view.

× Yes, I said earlier I look out the window when I was a travelling because it helps me to remove my boredom and feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I said earlier I look out the window when I am travelling because it helps me to relieve my boredom and makes me feel relaxed.

The original mixes past and present ('I said earlier' with 'when I was a travelling') and uses incorrect forms: 'was a travelling' is wrong. Use present simple/progressive for habitual actions: 'I look out the window when I am travelling.' Also use 'relieve my boredom' instead of 'remove my boredom' and add 'makes me' to correctly link subject and adjective 'relaxed.' Replace 'a travelling' with 'travelling' or 'traveling' (no article).

× Not usually, but whenever I seen a good view or amazing things at that time I take a photos of the scenery.

✓ Not usually, but whenever I see a good view or something amazing I take photos of the scenery.

The verb 'seen' is the past participle and incorrect here; for habitual present use 'see.' Also tense should remain present: 'I take photos.' Remove the article 'a' before 'photos' because 'photos' is plural. Replace 'amazing things at that time' with 'something amazing' for natural phrasing and correct reference to occasions when the action happens.

× Well, I prefer to prefer sea because the sound of the whale that is, uh, more relaxed and relaxed and the cool breeze and the sky is look like, uh, during the sunset and the sky look like a pink and orange shed. So it's a very breathtaking view.

✓ Well, I prefer the sea because the sound of the waves is very relaxing, and the cool breeze and the sky at sunset look pink and orange. So it is a very breathtaking view.

Multiple present-tense and word-choice issues: 'prefer to prefer' is redundant; use 'prefer the sea.' 'Sound of the whale' is likely incorrect context; 'sound of the waves' fits seaside. Use present simple 'is' for 'the sound of the waves is very relaxing.' 'Relaxed and relaxed' is repetitive; use 'very relaxing.' 'The sky is look like' and 'the sky look like' are wrong—use 'the sky ... look' with plural agreement to 'sky' functioning collectively or 'looks' singular; here rephrased as 'the sky at sunset look pink and orange' or 'looks pink and orange.' 'Shed' is incorrect word choice; remove it. Ensure tense consistency and natural collocations.