旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and add one specific supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and contractions like "I'm always" twice. Also correct verb forms (e.g., "look out", "when I travel").

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car or bus. I enjoy watching changing landscapes because they lift my mood, especially when I see colourful fields or interesting buildings. For example, last weekend I watched fishermen working on the river, which made the journey feel peaceful.

建議: Reduce hesitations and make verb forms correct. Start with a direct statement, then give a concise reason and one specific example. Use linking words like "however" or "because" to connect ideas. Avoid redundant phrases such as "perfect minutes and time."

範例: Yes, I often take photos of interesting views from the car window. Although it can be difficult while driving, I try to photograph scenes when I'm a passenger because I want to remember special moments, such as a golden sunset over the hills last summer.

建議: Correct vocabulary and grammar ("the sea" not "they see"); start with a clear preference sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" and avoid vague words like "more flexible." Mention a concrete detail about the sea that explains why it calms you.

範例: I prefer the sea because I grew up near the Black Sea and its sound and fresh air help me relax. For instance, walking along the shore in the evening calms me and clears my mind after a busy day.

× I'm always lookout the window at the scenery when I traveling by car or by bus because I would like to capture bright moments and for me scenery and landscape are very attractive, so I feel great when I look out the window.

✓ I'm always looking out of the window at the scenery when I travel by car or by bus because I would like to capture bright moments, and the scenery and landscape are very attractive to me, so I feel great when I look out the window.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'lookout' (should be present participle 'looking') and incorrect form 'traveling' after subject 'I' (should be base form 'travel' for simple present). Also missing preposition 'out of' after 'looking' and awkward word order for 'for me scenery and landscape'. Suggestion: Use 'looking out of' for the action of looking outside, use simple present for habitual actions (I travel), and reorder phrase to 'the scenery and landscape are very attractive to me' for clarity.

× Uh, I'm always, uh, take photos of the landscapes, uh, and interesting views, uh, outside the, the car window.

✓ Uh, I'm always taking photos of the landscapes and interesting views outside the car window.

Error: after 'I'm always' use present continuous with -ing form ('taking'), not base verb 'take'. Also remove duplicate 'the' and unnecessary pauses. Suggestion: Use 'I'm always taking' to describe a habitual action with emphasis and streamline the sentence.

× It's a little bit hard when you are, uh, driving, uh, but uh, I always try because I would like to, uh, memorize this perfect minutes and time.

✓ It's a little bit hard when you are driving, but I always try because I would like to memorize these perfect moments.

Errors: 'memorize' is fine but 'this perfect minutes and time' mixes singular/plural and wrong nouns. Use plural 'moments' and 'these' to agree. Also 'minutes and time' is redundant; 'moments' is the correct noun. Suggestion: Use 'these perfect moments' for grammatical agreement and clarity.

× From my perspective, I prefer they see because I live near the sea.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer the sea because I live near it.

Errors: 'they see' is incorrect pronoun use and word order; likely intended 'the sea'. Also 'live near the sea' requires a pronoun 'it' when referring back. Suggestion: Use 'prefer the sea' and 'live near it' or 'I live near the sea' without repetition.

× My hometown is situated nearest Black Sea, so for me it's more flexible and more attractive and I always feel calm.

✓ My hometown is situated near the Black Sea, so for me it's more peaceful and attractive, and I always feel calm.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'Black Sea' and wrong adjective 'nearest' (use 'near' or 'near the'). 'Flexible' is inappropriate to describe a place; 'peaceful' fits better. Suggestion: Use 'situated near the Black Sea' and choose appropriate adjectives like 'peaceful' or 'attractive'.