旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (verb forms and articles), reduce redundancy, and use clear linking words. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using connectors (e.g., "however", "because"). Watch singular/plural forms and verb agreement ("it makes", "a long journey").

範例: I usually look out of the window on short trips because I enjoy the changing scenery and it helps me relax. However, on long journeys I prefer to listen to music or take a short nap to pass the time.

建議: Good content and clear idea. Make sentences more natural by tightening phrasing and using a linking word for contrast. Use more specific vocabulary (e.g., "rare views", "landscape") and correct idiomatic phrases like "to keep as a memory" or "to remember the place".

範例: Usually I don't take photos from the car window because the view moves too quickly. However, if I spot a rare or striking landscape, I will take a photo to remember it.

建議: Clarify and correct grammar and vocabulary errors. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your preference, then give two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Fix verb forms and tenses ("I like the sea", "I can swim", "the sound of the waves makes me feel calm"). Avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach. Also, the sound of the waves makes me feel calm and refreshed, so I often choose seaside trips when I want to unwind.

× It depends, if I'm on a short trip I often look out the window to appreciate the views because it can makes me feel relaxed.

✓ It depends; if I'm on a short trip I often look out the window to appreciate the views because it can make me feel relaxed.

The modal verb phrase 'can make' should be followed by the base form 'make', not 'makes'. Using 'makes' causes a subject-verb agreement error after the modal 'can'. Also replace the comma with a semicolon or period to separate the two independent clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use 'can make' and separate clauses properly. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× But if I'm on a long journeys I prefer to listen to music or take a nap.

✓ But if I'm on a long journey I prefer to listen to music or take a nap.

The noun 'journeys' is plural while the subject 'I' and the determiner 'a' indicate singular. This is a singular/plural mismatch. Use the singular 'journey' to agree with 'a'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Most of the time I don't take pictures of the scenery outside the car window, but if I see some really beautiful and unique scenery, I will take photos to keep a memory.

✓ Most of the time I don't take pictures of the scenery outside the car window, but if I see some really beautiful and unique scenery, I will take photos to keep a memory of it.

The phrase 'keep a memory' is incomplete in English; we usually say 'keep a memory of it' or 'keep it as a memory' or 'create a memory'. This is an issue of word choice/phrase structure rather than tense. Suggestion: add 'of it' to make the object explicit. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I like to see because I love swimming.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love swimming.

The original sentence 'I like to see' is ungrammatical and likely a typo for 'I like to sea' or 'I like the sea'. This is a sentence structure error. To answer the question 'Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?' a clear comparative statement is needed. Suggestion: use 'I prefer the sea because I love swimming.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I can swimming in the ocean and also I love the sounds of sea waves.

✓ I can swim in the ocean and I also love the sound of the waves.

After modal 'can' the verb must be in base form: 'swim', not 'swimming'. Also 'sounds of sea waves' is awkward; 'the sound of the waves' or 'the sound of the sea' is more natural and 'sound' is usually singular as a general phenomenon. Suggestion: use 'can swim' and 'the sound of the waves'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Every time I heard the sounds of waves it can makes me feel calm.

✓ Every time I hear the sound of the waves, it can make me feel calm.

The clause should use present simple 'hear' for a habitual action, not past 'heard'. Also 'can makes' is incorrect; after 'can' use base verb 'make'. 'Sounds of waves' is better phrased as 'the sound of the waves'. Add a comma after the adverbial clause for clarity. Suggestion: 'Every time I hear the sound of the waves, it can make me feel calm.' Grammar problem type ID: 5